The Youth Series, Part 2: A relationship forged by unbreakable ties (Queen)

TrampInaTux · 12-28-2006, 07:41 PM

Your Dad banged you up last night
and I shouted at you, cos you wouldn't confide in me
You wandered the streets alone
While I flicked through all the smut on my TV
Standing on my porch, white as a ghost
contemplating whether to come in
You thought against it, made your way back
zipped up your coat and thought you should take it all on your chin

CHORUS
At this young age there are decisions you must make
that unfortunately affect the life you're going to take
It's hard, we know, we've all been there and talked to the wall
because when you're below 18 your opinion doesn't matter at all
Don't give up now, love, only 2 years left to go
til you're a woman not a daughter or some burberry clad lads little hoe

Your Dad hit your Mom last night,
and I ran off cos I just couldn't take it
My life's more important than yours,
only so long that I could fake it
I didn't have the courage to open my door or answer your calls
so I stayed at a friends and went round the bend,
just trying to get away from it all
Your life is tough, yes I know
you've told me enough times, text me countless times
but explain to me how I show
all this love you say you need?
I give it big but I'm only sixteen

CHORUS
At this young age there are decisions you must make
that unfortunately affect the life you're going to take
It's hard, we know, we've all been there and talked to the wall
because when you're below 18 your opinion doesn't matter at all
Don't give up now, love, only 2 years left to go
til you're a woman not a daughter or some burberry clad lads little hoe

If only she had the courage to do what she intended
finished the job, cut all that **** out her gob
her life would have been better ended
So now I sit, forced to wait by her hospital bed
I'm only sixteen, and I'm wishing my burberry queen
and my unborn baby
were both
dead.

sleepy jack · 12-28-2006, 07:46 PM

Oh shit man, that was great. This is easily one of the best things i've seen by you.

predictable_dreams · 12-31-2006, 11:11 AM

that was really good and the chorus was amazing and the ending worked sometimes some people tend to go off a bit towards the end but you didnt good stuff!

12-28-2006, 07:41 PM	#1 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	The Youth Series, Part 2: A relationship forged by unbreakable ties Your Dad banged you up last night and I shouted at you, cos you wouldn't confide in me You wandered the streets alone While I flicked through all the smut on my TV Standing on my porch, white as a ghost contemplating whether to come in You thought against it, made your way back zipped up your coat and thought you should take it all on your chin CHORUS At this young age there are decisions you must make that unfortunately affect the life you're going to take It's hard, we know, we've all been there and talked to the wall because when you're below 18 your opinion doesn't matter at all Don't give up now, love, only 2 years left to go til you're a woman not a daughter or some burberry clad lads little hoe Your Dad hit your Mom last night, and I ran off cos I just couldn't take it My life's more important than yours, only so long that I could fake it I didn't have the courage to open my door or answer your calls so I stayed at a friends and went round the bend, just trying to get away from it all Your life is tough, yes I know you've told me enough times, text me countless times but explain to me how I show all this love you say you need? I give it big but I'm only sixteen CHORUS At this young age there are decisions you must make that unfortunately affect the life you're going to take It's hard, we know, we've all been there and talked to the wall because when you're below 18 your opinion doesn't matter at all Don't give up now, love, only 2 years left to go til you're a woman not a daughter or some burberry clad lads little hoe If only she had the courage to do what she intended finished the job, cut all that **** out her gob her life would have been better ended So now I sit, forced to wait by her hospital bed I'm only sixteen, and I'm wishing my burberry queen and my unborn baby were both dead.

12-31-2006, 11:11 AM	#3 (permalink)
predictable_dreams Groupie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Belfast Posts: 2	that was really good and the chorus was amazing and the ending worked sometimes some people tend to go off a bit towards the end but you didnt good stuff! __________________ WiThOuT MuSiC LiFe WoUlD Be A MiStAkE