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12-11-2006, 12:56 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 12
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Chamomile
(verse 1)
can you still drink me under the table? do you still believe all of those fables? i am running on too many cables i can try but i dont think i'm able, oh. i can't even remember your last name. i am stuck in these constant freeze frames separate my anxiety and i'm still vain i am still here and playing the same game. (chorus 1) stories that would not unfold all those lies that you were told words that you could not define why can't i just read your mind? but will you remember me? will you remember me? will you remember me? will you remember me, chamomile? (verse2) can you still pick up all the remainders? can you still handle all of these strangers? and just so you know, i'm letting you stay for safekeeping. and just so you know, you screw this up again and i'm leaving. (chorus 2) phone calls in the afternoon sleeping in the same bedroom and anytime you feel alone i hope that you call out my name. will you remember me? am i in your memory? will you stay or leave? will you remember me,chamomile? (guitar solo) (chorus 1 and 2 a few times then over) |
12-11-2006, 03:38 PM | #2 (permalink) |
dontcareaboutyou
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: North Carolina
Posts: 5,188
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Are you serious? This is pretty laughable. The rhyming is cheesy and really bad. And there is no story is just random words to fill in the between the last words of the lines.
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12-12-2006, 09:58 AM | #4 (permalink) |
Idontthinkyouknow
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Out of the Frying Pan
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No music, no genre. What does the meldoy and guitar sound like. The music could help a lot, but by itself I think it's too simplistic, like pop punk with cheesy emotives.
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12-14-2006, 02:25 AM | #5 (permalink) |
Don't think twice
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: A basement on the hill
Posts: 352
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chamomile tea?
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