Chamomile (pop, punk, genre, member, solo)

dremecast · 12-11-2006, 12:56 PM

(verse 1)
can you still drink me under the table?
do you still believe all of those fables?
i am running on too many cables
i can try but i dont think i'm able, oh.

i can't even remember your last name.
i am stuck in these constant freeze frames
separate my anxiety and i'm still vain
i am still here and playing the same game.

(chorus 1)
stories that would not unfold
all those lies that you were told
words that you could not define
why can't i just read your mind?

but will you remember me?
will you remember me?
will you remember me?
will you remember me, chamomile?

(verse2)
can you still pick up all the remainders?
can you still handle all of these strangers?
and just so you know, i'm letting you stay for safekeeping.
and just so you know, you screw this up again and i'm leaving.

(chorus 2)
phone calls in the afternoon
sleeping in the same bedroom
and anytime you feel alone
i hope that you call out my name.

will you remember me?
am i in your memory?
will you stay or leave?
will you remember me,chamomile?
(guitar solo)

(chorus 1 and 2 a few times then over)

swim · 12-11-2006, 03:38 PM

Are you serious? This is pretty laughable. The rhyming is cheesy and really bad. And there is no story is just random words to fill in the between the last words of the lines.

right-track · 12-11-2006, 03:47 PM

To be fair, I think this is one of those that would come over better when heard.

Crashing Sun · 12-12-2006, 09:58 AM

No music, no genre. What does the meldoy and guitar sound like. The music could help a lot, but by itself I think it's too simplistic, like pop punk with cheesy emotives.

either/or · 12-14-2006, 02:25 AM

chamomile tea?

Alo · 12-14-2006, 03:28 AM

I don't get it!

That is... If there is anything to get in this song.

~~The Unfan~~ · 12-14-2006, 05:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alo

I don't get it!

That is... If there is anything to get in this song.

Obviously about an old love interest in tea. He has grown up and moved on to coffee.

dremecast · 12-15-2006, 02:23 PM

me and my friend have worked out this song on guitar it actually sounds good, we hope to get it recorded soon, its got a slow beat. its a strictly acoustic song..

p.s. its about a girl named chamomile by the way.

12-11-2006, 12:56 PM	#1 (permalink)
dremecast Groupie Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 12	Chamomile (verse 1) can you still drink me under the table? do you still believe all of those fables? i am running on too many cables i can try but i dont think i'm able, oh. i can't even remember your last name. i am stuck in these constant freeze frames separate my anxiety and i'm still vain i am still here and playing the same game. (chorus 1) stories that would not unfold all those lies that you were told words that you could not define why can't i just read your mind? but will you remember me? will you remember me? will you remember me? will you remember me, chamomile? (verse2) can you still pick up all the remainders? can you still handle all of these strangers? and just so you know, i'm letting you stay for safekeeping. and just so you know, you screw this up again and i'm leaving. (chorus 2) phone calls in the afternoon sleeping in the same bedroom and anytime you feel alone i hope that you call out my name. will you remember me? am i in your memory? will you stay or leave? will you remember me,chamomile? (guitar solo) (chorus 1 and 2 a few times then over)

12-11-2006, 03:38 PM	#2 (permalink)
swim dontcareaboutyou Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: North Carolina Posts: 5,188	Are you serious? This is pretty laughable. The rhyming is cheesy and really bad. And there is no story is just random words to fill in the between the last words of the lines. __________________ http://nakednaps.bandcamp.com/

12-12-2006, 09:58 AM	#4 (permalink)
Crashing Sun Idontthinkyouknow Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Out of the Frying Pan Posts: 102	No music, no genre. What does the meldoy and guitar sound like. The music could help a lot, but by itself I think it's too simplistic, like pop punk with cheesy emotives. __________________ People Against People "Scientists in Taiwan say they have bred three pigs that glow in the dark." (Support Spam)

12-14-2006, 02:25 AM	#5 (permalink)
either/or Don't think twice Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: A basement on the hill Posts: 352	chamomile tea? __________________ Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation

12-14-2006, 03:28 AM	#6 (permalink)
Alo Scarf Join Date: May 2006 Location: Brighton, UK Posts: 715	I don't get it! That is... If there is anything to get in this song. __________________ I rocked my shoelaces untied

12-11-2006, 03:47 PM	#3 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	To be fair, I think this is one of those that would come over better when heard.

12-15-2006, 02:23 PM	#8 (permalink)
dremecast Groupie Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 12	me and my friend have worked out this song on guitar it actually sounds good, we hope to get it recorded soon, its got a slow beat. its a strictly acoustic song.. p.s. its about a girl named chamomile by the way.