Sun Kissed (track, quote)

Desired_Moments · 12-03-2006, 03:52 PM

Sun kissed,
And smiling fine.
She looks sweetly at me,
And I gently melt, so slowly.
As her finger-tips caress my fair neck,
And trace sweet lines of ashen dew.
I sigh out in whispers
And take her hand.
Sun kissed…

sleepy jack · 12-03-2006, 04:31 PM

OMG A NEW n00bs WHO WRITING DOESN'T SUCK =O

This is pretty, I like it.

Desired_Moments · 12-03-2006, 04:32 PM

Lmao. I was waiting for you to say something. I've heard you can be very critical

right-track · 12-03-2006, 04:45 PM

He likes it cos of your poetic/romantic turn of phrase.

In other words...you remind him of himself.

Desired_Moments · 12-03-2006, 04:45 PM

ahhhhh:P

sleepy jack · 12-03-2006, 04:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by right-track

He likes it cos of your poetic/romantic turn of phrase.

In other words...you remind him of himself.

HEY

Shut up!

My romantic poems deal with being in fields at night, ask Crowe.

right-track · 12-03-2006, 04:49 PM

With stars twinkling in the night sky, reflecting your eyes like diamonds that cut my soul and scar my heart.

sleepy jack · 12-03-2006, 04:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by right-track

With stars twinkling in the night sky, reflecting your eyes like diamonds that cut my soul and scar my heart.

Hey, can I use that?
;D

Desired_Moments · 12-03-2006, 04:52 PM

lmao

Crowe · 12-03-2006, 08:57 PM

If anything romantic happens in Crowquill's world - it must take place near a girl with nice curves, with a gentle moonlight, in or near a field... and someone has to cry. I love it.

12-03-2006, 03:52 PM	#1 (permalink)
Desired_Moments *** Junkie Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Loughor, Swansea, Wales Posts: 82	Sun Kissed Sun kissed, And smiling fine. She looks sweetly at me, And I gently melt, so slowly. As her finger-tips caress my fair neck, And trace sweet lines of ashen dew. I sigh out in whispers And take her hand. Sun kissed…

12-03-2006, 08:57 PM	#10 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	If anything romantic happens in Crowquill's world - it must take place near a girl with nice curves, with a gentle moonlight, in or near a field... and someone has to cry. I love it. __________________

12-03-2006, 04:32 PM	#3 (permalink)
Desired_Moments *** Junkie Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Loughor, Swansea, Wales Posts: 82	Lmao. I was waiting for you to say something. I've heard you can be very critical

12-03-2006, 04:45 PM	#4 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	He likes it cos of your poetic/romantic turn of phrase. In other words...you remind him of himself.

12-03-2006, 04:45 PM	#5 (permalink)
Desired_Moments *** Junkie Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Loughor, Swansea, Wales Posts: 82	ahhhhh:P

12-03-2006, 04:49 PM	#7 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	With stars twinkling in the night sky, reflecting your eyes like diamonds that cut my soul and scar my heart.

12-03-2006, 04:52 PM	#9 (permalink)
Desired_Moments *** Junkie Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Loughor, Swansea, Wales Posts: 82	lmao