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Desired_Moments 12-03-2006 02:52 PM
Sun Kissed
 
Sun kissed,
And smiling fine.
She looks sweetly at me,
And I gently melt, so slowly.
As her finger-tips caress my fair neck,
And trace sweet lines of ashen dew.
I sigh out in whispers
And take her hand.
Sun kissed…

sleepy jack 12-03-2006 03:31 PM
OMG A NEW n00bs WHO WRITING DOESN'T SUCK =O

This is pretty, I like it.

Desired_Moments 12-03-2006 03:32 PM
Lmao. I was waiting for you to say something. I've heard you can be very critical ;)

right-track 12-03-2006 03:45 PM
He likes it cos of your poetic/romantic turn of phrase.

In other words...you remind him of himself.

Desired_Moments 12-03-2006 03:45 PM
ahhhhh:P

sleepy jack 12-03-2006 03:47 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by right-track (Post 307325)
He likes it cos of your poetic/romantic turn of phrase.

In other words...you remind him of himself.
HEY

Shut up!

My romantic poems deal with being in fields at night, ask Crowe.

right-track 12-03-2006 03:49 PM
With stars twinkling in the night sky, reflecting your eyes like diamonds that cut my soul and scar my heart. :rolleyes:

sleepy jack 12-03-2006 03:51 PM
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Originally Posted by right-track (Post 307336)
With stars twinkling in the night sky, reflecting your eyes like diamonds that cut my soul and scar my heart. :rolleyes:
Hey, can I use that?
;D

Desired_Moments 12-03-2006 03:52 PM
lmao

Crowe 12-03-2006 07:57 PM
If anything romantic happens in Crowquill's world - it must take place near a girl with nice curves, with a gentle moonlight, in or near a field... and someone has to cry. I love it.


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