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yours
(verse 1)
i phoned you yesterday your phone was off the hook. didnt want to call again. it just took too much work. and i dont know if i can do this again. i stopped by yesterday your house was up for sale. i stood there in the rain you didnt get the mail i started crying out in pain. (bridge) cuz if i hurt you, then theres nothing i can do about it) (chorus) when you want someone today and you need someone tomorrow i'll be there to share your pain i'll be there to share your sorrow just know i'm always here and know i'm always yours (verse2) i know i'm not that sane i know i'm not that fragile but if you help me ease the pain it wont be such a hassle and i wont do this again you're beautiful to me you know just how to do it i dont know what to say i dont know how to prove it i want you to know that im always yours. (bridge) cuz i need this more than anything you know (chorus)(2x) (bridge 3) i'm yours and i dont want to lose this war. cuz i'm yours and i just wanna know will everything turn out okay. (chorus a few times then over) |
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"cuz if i hurt you, then theres nothing i can do about it"
You can be a nice guy and apologize about it, duh. Seriously man, this girl sounds like no fun. |
I think that you should leave a beat similar to the one that is supposed to be for the song so we can understand it more.[overall it was not bad but it wasnt good] no offense
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