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10-17-2006, 04:58 AM | #1 (permalink) |
w0rd
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: Suva, Fiji
Posts: 1,034
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Untitled :O
Face staring at the sky
I lay there thinking Is this where I die? Or is it just a feeling It feels like I'm falling As if I'm jumping for my life If anyone is calling I'm afraid it's too late... I've been thinking alot, watching the clouds pass by I've been left to rot... Left to die You grabbed my hand, you grapsed it tight But it wasn't enough, I was lost in the light I'm all alone... X2 It's all I got so far, thats like a 5 minute job though |
10-18-2006, 10:15 AM | #2 (permalink) |
Me and The Major
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Kentucky
Posts: 1,830
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A fairly trite subject as far as i'm concerned. It doesn't really paint a very good picture, all I can see is someone (a blank person), lying on the ground and dying.... dying somewhat peacefully.
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