Pusher or the Partner? (songs, Hang)

TrampInaTux · 10-15-2006, 03:18 PM

You wish he'd stop
He says that he has but in your head you know he's not
giving up just for you
He blames it on the stress or the lack of things to do
And it's so painful
This is the last time you'll help him you swear
Give him an ultimatum and get him out your hair

CHORUS
It's the pusher or the partner
You have to choose
It's the pusher or the partner
Which one do you lose?
It's the pusher or the partner
The mornings getting shorter
the nights are getting darker
She needs to know
Is it the pusher or the partner

And it's getting late she knows its another night alone
I bet the dealer is dreaming sweeter than he has ever done before
He doesn't have to pick the pieces from off the vomit-stained floor
Just gets the money without a care then comes back from more
John's eyes are blind, and bloodshot every time
Used to be one of a kind
Now he's just out of his mind
And she needs to find

CHORUS
Is it the pusher or the partner?
You have to choose
It's the pusher or the partner
Which one do you lose?
It's the pusher or the partner
The mornings getting shorter
the nights are getting darker
She needs to know
Is it the pusher or the partner

She stands at the top of the stairs looking down
"Where was you tonight?" Cue the fake surprise frown
"I was nowhere" He replies
Well how come he's not looking her in the eyes
"Look I really really need to bed
Work tomorrow and I've got a bad head"
"You never work so tell me the truth"
He crouches down and coughs up blood on his shoes

CHORUS
Is it the pusher or the partner?
You have to choose
It's the pusher or the partner
Which one do you lose?
It's the pusher or the partner
The mornings getting shorter
the nights are getting darker
She needs to know
Is it the pusher or the partner

RT's idea. Done quite quickly. I've changed it to a relationship between man and woman, instead of best friends.

right-track · 10-15-2006, 03:27 PM

I find the fact that you've come up with that within about, what? 20 minutes...incredible!

Like the change between perspectives. Verse, her. Chorus, him.
Maybe something inbetween the 1st chorus and the 2nd verse.
Like an argument...something where they interact...dunno.

TrampInaTux · 10-15-2006, 03:37 PM

Done.

right-track · 10-15-2006, 03:38 PM

*is amazed*

TrampInaTux · 10-15-2006, 03:39 PM

Like it?

right-track · 10-15-2006, 03:43 PM

Very much. I'm still getting over how quickly you did all that.
You even got the end of the new bit rhyming with the beginning of the last chorus. *scratches head*

Do you like it?

TrampInaTux · 10-15-2006, 04:05 PM

It's alright... I've gone off this style a bit now... it's not as challenging, I prefer to go a bit deeper. More meaningful.

right-track · 10-15-2006, 04:11 PM

So why not merge the two?

TrampInaTux · 10-15-2006, 04:26 PM

It always ends up one or the other... When I'm writing a story I can't make it deeper because it's a story... I can't really connect... but with other songs I write I can connect.

dirt mcgirt · 10-16-2006, 03:00 AM

ayo, it aint *** if you the pusher son, only if you tha one catchin.

10-15-2006, 03:18 PM	#1 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Pusher or the Partner? You wish he'd stop He says that he has but in your head you know he's not giving up just for you He blames it on the stress or the lack of things to do And it's so painful This is the last time you'll help him you swear Give him an ultimatum and get him out your hair CHORUS It's the pusher or the partner You have to choose It's the pusher or the partner Which one do you lose? It's the pusher or the partner The mornings getting shorter the nights are getting darker She needs to know Is it the pusher or the partner And it's getting late she knows its another night alone I bet the dealer is dreaming sweeter than he has ever done before He doesn't have to pick the pieces from off the vomit-stained floor Just gets the money without a care then comes back from more John's eyes are blind, and bloodshot every time Used to be one of a kind Now he's just out of his mind And she needs to find CHORUS Is it the pusher or the partner? You have to choose It's the pusher or the partner Which one do you lose? It's the pusher or the partner The mornings getting shorter the nights are getting darker She needs to know Is it the pusher or the partner She stands at the top of the stairs looking down "Where was you tonight?" Cue the fake surprise frown "I was nowhere" He replies Well how come he's not looking her in the eyes "Look I really really need to bed Work tomorrow and I've got a bad head" "You never work so tell me the truth" He crouches down and coughs up blood on his shoes CHORUS Is it the pusher or the partner? You have to choose It's the pusher or the partner Which one do you lose? It's the pusher or the partner The mornings getting shorter the nights are getting darker She needs to know Is it the pusher or the partner RT's idea. Done quite quickly. I've changed it to a relationship between man and woman, instead of best friends.

10-15-2006, 03:27 PM	#2 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	I find the fact that you've come up with that within about, what? 20 minutes...incredible! Like the change between perspectives. Verse, her. Chorus, him. Maybe something inbetween the 1st chorus and the 2nd verse. Like an argument...something where they interact...dunno.

10-15-2006, 03:37 PM	#3 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Done.

10-15-2006, 03:38 PM	#4 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	is amazed

10-15-2006, 03:39 PM	#5 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Like it?

10-15-2006, 03:43 PM	#6 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	Very much. I'm still getting over how quickly you did all that. You even got the end of the new bit rhyming with the beginning of the last chorus. scratches head Do you like it?

10-15-2006, 04:05 PM	#7 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	It's alright... I've gone off this style a bit now... it's not as challenging, I prefer to go a bit deeper. More meaningful.

10-15-2006, 04:11 PM	#8 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	So why not merge the two?

10-15-2006, 04:26 PM	#9 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	It always ends up one or the other... When I'm writing a story I can't make it deeper because it's a story... I can't really connect... but with other songs I write I can connect.

10-16-2006, 03:00 AM	#10 (permalink)
dirt mcgirt lift ya skirt Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: brooklyn zoo, what? Posts: 194	ayo, it aint *** if you the pusher son, only if you tha one catchin.