Little things (blues, dance, song)

TrampInaTux · 10-14-2006, 05:11 PM

Do I have to ask now?
Is that the way it will work from here on in?
Did it used to be like this?
When did you begin to get beneath my skin?
There are several words I could use
But I need to know which one will work
I'm the one down in the blues
So why am I doing all the work?

CHORUS
It's little things piling on top of
Little things
I wish I could say they don't harm me
Oh, looks like I'm in the wrong again...

All I've got so far.... comments on whether I should progress please

sleepy jack · 10-15-2006, 01:35 PM

I love the chorus mainy cause its very relatable to me, I think you should continue on it.

Crowe · 10-15-2006, 03:44 PM

this is the name of a good charolette song.

sleepy jack · 10-15-2006, 03:51 PM

OMGG

yeah this song is dedicated, this is good charlotte to every kid whoever got picked last gym class THIS IS FOR YOU to every kid who never a date to no school dance THIS IS FOR YOU to every kid WHA to every kid WHAA THIS IS FOR YOU HERE WE GO

*forgets*

~~Ekset~~ · 10-19-2006, 07:32 PM

^^ :P

Good start. Chorus is stronger than the intro. Anything added yet?

-Ekset

10-14-2006, 05:11 PM	#1 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Little things Do I have to ask now? Is that the way it will work from here on in? Did it used to be like this? When did you begin to get beneath my skin? There are several words I could use But I need to know which one will work I'm the one down in the blues So why am I doing all the work? CHORUS It's little things piling on top of Little things I wish I could say they don't harm me Oh, looks like I'm in the wrong again... All I've got so far.... comments on whether I should progress please

10-15-2006, 03:44 PM	#3 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	this is the name of a good charolette song. __________________

10-19-2006, 07:32 PM	#5 (permalink)
~~Ekset~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Valencia, CA Posts: 10	^^ :P Good start. Chorus is stronger than the intro. Anything added yet? -Ekset