For The Hills
 

The sky fell last week;
Rather, the buildings did.
Concrete crumbling around us,
We ran for the hills;

Nothing could crush us there.

(I did not write these as lyrics; I hope plain ol' poetry is acceptable, as well. :) )

Extend it! Its good, the ending is kind of weak though.

^ I agree with Crowquill, maybe you could extend it by making it into a metaphor. And if it is already, make it more obvious.

the alliteration was my favorite part.

I loved it. :love: (see i really loved it)