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Old 09-29-2006, 05:19 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Time Not Passing

A cloud that doesn't deteriorate
The everlasting leaves
You wish the hours would pass
But you don't even breathe.
It's an eternal feeling
An emotion, not needed
As you wish the pendulum would swing
You just sit there... Screaming.

The images, the dreams and the wishes.
You see them all pass at once.
You seem to think time is moving
But really, all existence is stuck.
Everything alive is stuck… X 2

It seems that everything is fine
As it would seem that I am sane
But there is something stopping it
stopping my horrible corruption
It’s like schizophrenia, y’know
You hear the voices but they won’t stop
But as this gets under your skin…
It’s a feeling that causes… Insanity

The images, the dreams and the wishes.
You see them all pass at once.
You seem to think time is moving
But really, all existence is stuck.
Everything alive is stuck… X 2

Breathing, Screaming…
It seems that’s all we do
Staring, Dreaming…
Theres nothing left to lose…

Give us your thoughts. I really quite liked this one, but any criticism/advice would be fine.

It's kinda intended for a song slightly like Prince of Darkness by Megadeth. Like slowish tempo with a bit of screaming.
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