Time Not Passing (lyrics, solo, quote, song)

Blain · 09-29-2006, 06:19 AM

A cloud that doesn't deteriorate
The everlasting leaves
You wish the hours would pass
But you don't even breathe.
It's an eternal feeling
An emotion, not needed
As you wish the pendulum would swing
You just sit there... Screaming.

The images, the dreams and the wishes.
You see them all pass at once.
You seem to think time is moving
But really, all existence is stuck.
Everything alive is stuck… X 2

It seems that everything is fine
As it would seem that I am sane
But there is something stopping it
stopping my horrible corruption
It’s like schizophrenia, y’know
You hear the voices but they won’t stop
But as this gets under your skin…
It’s a feeling that causes… Insanity

The images, the dreams and the wishes.
You see them all pass at once.
You seem to think time is moving
But really, all existence is stuck.
Everything alive is stuck… X 2

Breathing, Screaming…
It seems that’s all we do
Staring, Dreaming…
Theres nothing left to lose…

Give us your thoughts

. I really quite liked this one, but any criticism/advice would be fine.

It's kinda intended for a song slightly like Prince of Darkness by Megadeth. Like slowish tempo with a bit of screaming.

glazedface · 09-29-2006, 06:11 PM

nice work. i was reading it and imagining some badass shred solos between some of the verses,

daddym · 09-30-2006, 03:43 PM

I liked the lyrics alot, however I don't really think it screamed megadeth rips...
As I read I was hearing more of a type o negative kinda vibe, or maybe like a danzig "can't sleep" ya know? just my opinion. good work though.

Quote:

Relative Simplicity,
If you don't like where you are, leave.

Blain · 10-03-2006, 04:32 AM

Thanks for those comments

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Atomic · 10-06-2006, 04:24 AM

Yeah, very megadeath - you have some good structure though and its flows quite well

09-29-2006, 06:19 AM	#1 (permalink)
Blain w0rd Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Suva, Fiji Posts: 1,034	Time Not Passing A cloud that doesn't deteriorate The everlasting leaves You wish the hours would pass But you don't even breathe. It's an eternal feeling An emotion, not needed As you wish the pendulum would swing You just sit there... Screaming. The images, the dreams and the wishes. You see them all pass at once. You seem to think time is moving But really, all existence is stuck. Everything alive is stuck… X 2 It seems that everything is fine As it would seem that I am sane But there is something stopping it stopping my horrible corruption It’s like schizophrenia, y’know You hear the voices but they won’t stop But as this gets under your skin… It’s a feeling that causes… Insanity The images, the dreams and the wishes. You see them all pass at once. You seem to think time is moving But really, all existence is stuck. Everything alive is stuck… X 2 Breathing, Screaming… It seems that’s all we do Staring, Dreaming… Theres nothing left to lose… Give us your thoughts. I really quite liked this one, but any criticism/advice would be fine. It's kinda intended for a song slightly like Prince of Darkness by Megadeth. Like slowish tempo with a bit of screaming.

10-06-2006, 04:24 AM	#5 (permalink)
Atomic Groupie Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 9	Yeah, very megadeath - you have some good structure though and its flows quite well __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC] www.thetrons.com

09-29-2006, 06:11 PM	#2 (permalink)
glazedface Groupie Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 19	nice work. i was reading it and imagining some badass shred solos between some of the verses,

10-03-2006, 04:32 AM	#4 (permalink)
Blain w0rd Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Suva, Fiji Posts: 1,034	Thanks for those comments MORE MORE MORE!!!