She's so superifical (dance)

TrampInaTux · 09-13-2006, 12:52 PM

She's so superficial
Doesn't know what she's got
It makes you jealous
and jealous you are not
She's so glamorous
She likes all the fuss
Puts her make up on
and dances on his table
Dripping with gold and designer labels
She's so superficial
Can't read between the lines
She's so beautiful
but can't see through her own eyes
She's so elegant
When he said that he liked her
you knew what he meant
Don't admit though, don't admit though
it's against everything you know
She's so superficial
Got an eye for another man
That's official
He won't turn her down, no
She's got a reputation
for letting her dignity go
She's so uncaring
Stepped into your heart
and she isn't sharing
She really loves it that way
Keeping a man on his toes
and making him stay
She's so superficial
Doesn't know what she's got
It makes you jealous
And jealous you are not...

sleepy jack · 09-13-2006, 05:08 PM

I liked it, it kind of got repetitive with the shes so superficial over & over, but I imagine it wouldn't be like that if it got recorded. Lots of great lines in there "dripping with gold and designer labels". S'good

right-track · 09-13-2006, 05:13 PM

It needs a chorus to break it up.

She's so superficial
Doesn't know what she's got
It makes you jealous
And jealous you are not.

I'd use that ^ but add a bit more.

I like this...your stuff gets better all the time man.

09-13-2006, 12:52 PM	#1 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	She's so superifical She's so superficial Doesn't know what she's got It makes you jealous and jealous you are not She's so glamorous She likes all the fuss Puts her make up on and dances on his table Dripping with gold and designer labels She's so superficial Can't read between the lines She's so beautiful but can't see through her own eyes She's so elegant When he said that he liked her you knew what he meant Don't admit though, don't admit though it's against everything you know She's so superficial Got an eye for another man That's official He won't turn her down, no She's got a reputation for letting her dignity go She's so uncaring Stepped into your heart and she isn't sharing She really loves it that way Keeping a man on his toes and making him stay She's so superficial Doesn't know what she's got It makes you jealous And jealous you are not...

09-13-2006, 05:13 PM	#3 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	It needs a chorus to break it up. She's so superficial Doesn't know what she's got It makes you jealous And jealous you are not. I'd use that ^ but add a bit more. I like this...your stuff gets better all the time man.