Blain

The screams of the damned, it's all you can here
It's a noise that causes insanity.
As the shredding darkness closes in, all you can do is leer
That's what failed humanity.
But theres a special task, atonement
It will help you seek for salvage
If a lost priority can save you from ruin
What could a precious one do?

The hearts you've harmed, the damage done
It can all be swept away.
A treasonable act, a life perished.
This is what it's meant to heal!
A simple task can save your mind, it will save you from corruption...
Corruption... Demised (x2)


This is all I have, it may seem really Christiany but I didn't mean for it to be lol

Ace

The only real thing I don't like are the first and third lines.
Or I could just not be getting the timing at all, but I'd change the first and third line up.

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Originally Posted by RezZ I think I know much better than you ever will how Mettalica is. I used to play for 2 years in a Mettalica cover band.

either/or

i just watched hostel and for some reason this song reminds me of it.

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Painstaking devotion and love
Surrendered to self preservation
From others who care for themselves
A blindness that touches perfection
But hurts just like anything else

Isolation, isolation, isolation