ok....one more try (quote, memory, songs, Hang, Organ)

DearJenny · 09-09-2006, 12:10 AM

Dizziness sets in
Is this really what I want?
I ask myself in darkness
With the cigarette burning inches of its life and years of mine

Fantastical ideas of the abstract love
An thought it is....and so it shall be
Commitment is word used only by the secure
And the unstable suffer with tragedy after tragedy.

Looking back hurts
Differing the truth from lie
Makes me cry
Inside, makes me die.

So you toyed with me, had your fun
Hope you're happy because i'm not
This is what I get for falling for you
And this song what you get for ****ing with a 17-year old

This is VERY much a freeverse because i do not have the creativity to create stanzas and rhythm and ****. I just wanted some poetry. Feel free to tear it apart, I dont find it very good.

09-09-2006, 12:10 AM	#1 (permalink)
DearJenny Raptor Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Metro Detroit, MI Posts: 1,334	ok....one more try Dizziness sets in Is this really what I want? I ask myself in darkness With the cigarette burning inches of its life and years of mine Fantastical ideas of the abstract love An thought it is....and so it shall be Commitment is word used only by the secure And the unstable suffer with tragedy after tragedy. Looking back hurts Differing the truth from lie Makes me cry Inside, makes me die. So you toyed with me, had your fun Hope you're happy because i'm not This is what I get for falling for you And this song what you get for **ing with a 17-year old This is VERY much a freeverse because i do not have the creativity to create stanzas and rhythm and **. I just wanted some poetry. Feel free to tear it apart, I dont find it very good. __________________ So here's to living life miserable. And here's to all the lonely stories that I've told. Maybe drinking wine will validate my sorrow. Every man needs a muse and mine could be the bottle.