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jaded 08-28-2006 04:55 AM

Try me
 
my style is punk/emo whatever you wanna call it, ill let you judge it when you read it. im just starting in the song writing so..yeah if its not THAT good, thats the reason.

"try me"

(verse one)

the sum of my life adds up to nothin
time and time again i feel im suffocating
im just so sick of all the fighting
sometimes i feel i should walk away and start again

(chorus *)

im taking it all out on you
and all the sh*t you put me through
my head is overun with threats
am i in debt?

(verse two)

all my words screaming out loud
sieze the day when its all out
my boredom just passes the time
untill i just get old and die
talkings just a waste of breath
and livings just a waste of death

(*)

im taking it all out on you
and all the sh*t you put me through
my head is overun with threats
am i in debt?

(bridge)

i dont need you
f**k your desision
im going...
untill you decide you be "you" again

(*)

im taking it all out on you
and all the sh*t you put me through
my head is overun with threats
am i in debt?

(end verse)

i met you on the street the other day
all my words i didnt know what to say
we exchange a glance
but we just walk past
seems better this way

jaded 08-28-2006 10:42 PM

awsome, 18 views but no replys, now i feel special

sleepy jack 08-28-2006 10:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jaded
awsome, 18 views but no replys, now i feel special

Probaly because if I saw a thread with 18 "ew"s posted i'd lock it.

A_Perfect_Sonnet 08-28-2006 10:49 PM

Ethan ftw.

either/or 08-30-2006 04:37 AM

this song is only relevant if you live in a poverty stricken or war torn country or something. if not.....boo hoo, get a tissue.

jaded 08-31-2006 12:03 AM

soooorry..

jaded 08-31-2006 12:05 AM

you could at least not sound like an ass


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