Ode to an ex (lyrics, title, quote, song)

DearJenny · 08-10-2006, 05:19 PM

Scream my name
Rip me apart
The pain helps me see
And, oh, how I love it

(He's in your head
Like his nails in your back)

I want you to lie to me
I love it when you want me
I hate it when you're here,
so back the **** off

(My heart burns for you
I love you but I just dont want you)

I dont really write lyrics. I compose melodies better. So these arent the best, but I want to improve, so I posted these which I just wrote and hoped to get some pointers and suggestions.

How bad is it?

08-10-2006, 05:19 PM	#1 (permalink)
DearJenny Raptor Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Metro Detroit, MI Posts: 1,334	Ode to an ex Scream my name Rip me apart The pain helps me see And, oh, how I love it (He's in your head Like his nails in your back) I want you to lie to me I love it when you want me I hate it when you're here, so back the **** off (My heart burns for you I love you but I just dont want you) I dont really write lyrics. I compose melodies better. So these arent the best, but I want to improve, so I posted these which I just wrote and hoped to get some pointers and suggestions. How bad is it? __________________ So here's to living life miserable. And here's to all the lonely stories that I've told. Maybe drinking wine will validate my sorrow. Every man needs a muse and mine could be the bottle.