just because u guys dont like them. Your not going to try to change my opinion. im not going to stop liking them. because all of u dont like them. I m u have a band that you love that i probably hate and think cant write lyrics for s h i t e.

There lyrics aren't good, these ones aren't good. Quit taking it as a personal attack. I reccomend reading the tips thread, and stuff by hobojesus, crowe, dontrunmeover, either/or and a_perfect_sonnet and trying to find your own voice in writing, not someone elses.

i know these arent good lyrics. Im just starting out. I dont know if i should take song writing in to consideration. I rether get into art. and drawing. Writing songs is just something i do on my spare time. So i know im not the best. And that was something i wrote. like when i woke up in the moring cuz it hit me. im not using someone elses. if u dont beleive oh. well i tryd

I read stuff by crowe, his stuff is really good.

Don't be disheartened by a bit of critisism.
Keep at it and prove them wrong.
If you write a good one they'll give you the credit it deserves and you'll improve off the back of it.

The people Crowquill mentioned for you to read up on, have all had their share of critisism in the past.

im not mad about the critisism
I want them to be honest I thank them for that.
Because I posted it on my bebo page. And lots of ppl said it was really good. The other song i wrote. "masks". But i wanted someone to tell me what i could change. and make it better.

But I just dont like to be told that i dont use my own words. And im coping another band when I know i didnt. thats all.

I'm not that using other peoples words just overdone ideas. It's cliche.

well i see what you mean tho.

Howcome whenever someone is given an honest, negative opinion on their writing, they always feel the need to say something like "I'm just starting, so I know the lyrics aren't good" or "I just write when I'm bored"?

If you thought the lyrics sucked, you wouldn't post them.

It sounds like garbage
Much too cliche