first song on this board (country, dance, drum, bass)

Scooty138 · 07-11-2006, 11:32 PM

ok im not huge on showing stangers my work until its finnished but ill have a go for you
at the moment most of my songs are just a drumloop a bass line and vocals but im in the middle of looking for some one to write the guitar and drum parts
so yah tell me what you think
but dont just put it down for the sake of it
this song is kinda a non-scencical punk song
ok so its abit cheesey but hey its not a siriouse song

FELT THE SAME

Tell me what the **** should I do
with my love that I hold for you.
I know im a little retarded
im just a white trash punk.
I know ill never hold you
im never good enough.

From the first time I saw your smile
you handcuffed me we danced a while.

Felt the same thing a million times before
your happy to be friends
but never ****ing more.

Felt the same things never ever change
I guess I should give up
but that wont stop the pain. (OI OI OI)

Wish I could hold you so you could tell me your dreams
then I would make them true an hope you could love me.
But I know your country
im a little rock n roll. (Yee haw)
that don't really matter if you look into your soul.

From the first time I looked into your eyes
you hypnotized me
we could talk all night.

Felt the same thing a million times before
your happy to be friends
but never ****ing more.

Felt the same things never ever change
I guess I should give up
but that wont stop the pain.

(Oi Oi Oi)
will you be my new girlfriend?
(Oi Oi Oi)
I'll tie you to the bed
(Oi Oi Oi)
you just need to take a chance
(Oi Oi Oi)
I'll whip you an we'll hold hands

From the first time I saw your smile
you handcuffed me we danced a while.
From the first time I looked into your eyes
you hypnotized me
we could talk all night.

Felt the same thing a million times before
your happy to be friends
but never ****ing more.

Felt the same things never ever change
I guess I should give up
but that wont stop the pain.

Felt the same things hope its different this time
id make you my world
if only you'd be mine.

bruise_violet · 07-12-2006, 12:30 PM

Quote:

will you be my new girlfriend?
(Oi Oi Oi)
I'll tie you to the bed

This is actually the best chat-up line in the whole world. It would win me over, totally.

Scooty138 · 07-12-2006, 10:19 PM

lol thanks for the posative response
i thought the first line of that part was abit corny myself

bruise_violet · 07-13-2006, 09:42 AM

The 'I'll tie you to the bed' mad me laugh, in a good way

Scooty138 · 07-15-2006, 08:13 PM

lol sweet thats what i was going for

07-11-2006, 11:32 PM	#1 (permalink)
Scooty138 Groupie Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 21	first song on this board ok im not huge on showing stangers my work until its finnished but ill have a go for you at the moment most of my songs are just a drumloop a bass line and vocals but im in the middle of looking for some one to write the guitar and drum parts so yah tell me what you think but dont just put it down for the sake of it this song is kinda a non-scencical punk song ok so its abit cheesey but hey its not a siriouse song FELT THE SAME Tell me what the ** should I do with my love that I hold for you. I know im a little retarded im just a white trash punk. I know ill never hold you im never good enough. From the first time I saw your smile you handcuffed me we danced a while. Felt the same thing a million times before your happy to be friends but never ing more. Felt the same things never ever change I guess I should give up but that wont stop the pain. (OI OI OI) Wish I could hold you so you could tell me your dreams then I would make them true an hope you could love me. But I know your country im a little rock n roll. (Yee haw) that don't really matter if you look into your soul. From the first time I looked into your eyes you hypnotized me we could talk all night. Felt the same thing a million times before your happy to be friends but never ing more. Felt the same things never ever change I guess I should give up but that wont stop the pain. (Oi Oi Oi) will you be my new girlfriend? (Oi Oi Oi) I'll tie you to the bed (Oi Oi Oi) you just need to take a chance (Oi Oi Oi) I'll whip you an we'll hold hands From the first time I saw your smile you handcuffed me we danced a while. From the first time I looked into your eyes you hypnotized me we could talk all night. Felt the same thing a million times before your happy to be friends but never **ing more. Felt the same things never ever change I guess I should give up but that wont stop the pain. Felt the same things hope its different this time id make you my world if only you'd be mine.

07-13-2006, 09:42 AM	#4 (permalink)
bruise_violet we became a carcass! Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 383	The 'I'll tie you to the bed' mad me laugh, in a good way __________________ in love with the stumps, in love with the bleeding! in love with the pain that you now feel...

07-12-2006, 10:19 PM	#3 (permalink)
Scooty138 Groupie Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 21	lol thanks for the posative response i thought the first line of that part was abit corny myself

07-15-2006, 08:13 PM	#5 (permalink)
Scooty138 Groupie Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 21	lol sweet thats what i was going for