Hatred Eyes (song lyrics, metal, Religious, effect, review)

Winter · 07-08-2006, 04:33 PM

Hello, please would you take the time to review my lyrics I am writing for a song. Please feel free to criticise harshly as long as you can tell me how to improve, Thankyou for reading

Burning babies is your game.
Killing the innocent is the way
All in the name of Allah
All for the reason of Jesus.
But they will never believe us.

Let there children die on there death bed.
No medical care, Pray for them instead.
Let them die and chok hate on there final breath.
In there poor wounded hearts they die with no love left.

Discriminate, just 'cause your mind controlled.
Steal from the poor, cause there heart's are cold.
We are not all brainwashed, we are not all the same.
They will be in the hands of god, while we burn In flames.

In fear they die and weakness they live.
Confessing mistakes, so the lord will forgive

Look what there religion has done.
There skillful mind control device.
Following the bible but they never ask why
the sun will never rise for their eyes.
In saddness they hope, In fear they try.
They don't relise god is a weapon of lies.

Burning babies is your game.
Killing the innocent is the way.
All in the name of Allah
All for the reason of Jesus.
In words we tell, but they will never believe us.

Copyright.BenSmith (C)

Please make suggestions

And thanks once again!

07-08-2006, 04:33 PM	#1 (permalink)
Winter Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: The Darkest Coldest Place Posts: 94	Hatred Eyes Hello, please would you take the time to review my lyrics I am writing for a song. Please feel free to criticise harshly as long as you can tell me how to improve, Thankyou for reading Burning babies is your game. Killing the innocent is the way All in the name of Allah All for the reason of Jesus. But they will never believe us. Let there children die on there death bed. No medical care, Pray for them instead. Let them die and chok hate on there final breath. In there poor wounded hearts they die with no love left. Discriminate, just 'cause your mind controlled. Steal from the poor, cause there heart's are cold. We are not all brainwashed, we are not all the same. They will be in the hands of god, while we burn In flames. In fear they die and weakness they live. Confessing mistakes, so the lord will forgive Look what there religion has done. There skillful mind control device. Following the bible but they never ask why the sun will never rise for their eyes. In saddness they hope, In fear they try. They don't relise god is a weapon of lies. Burning babies is your game. Killing the innocent is the way. All in the name of Allah All for the reason of Jesus. In words we tell, but they will never believe us. Copyright.BenSmith (C) Please make suggestions And thanks once again!