Love, Always
 

Don’t take yourself too seriously
[You’re young and then you die]
Do what you want
While you can
And don’t let anyone
Tell you different

Don’t judge a magazine by the star on the front
Don’t be fake--don’t put on a front
(Never conform never brake)

Force people’s eyes open
Be a bitch if it’s really who you are
Someone will love you for it
(God knows I would.)

Don’t be afraid
Never be.
The worst outcome is death
And there is no Hell.
Evil is a choice
Choose what you want
(It makes no difference to the rest of us in the long run)

Destiny is
Fate is
(just is)
It’s all gonna happen anyway.

Make yourself happy
Be selfish
Live for you
Be selfish
Don’t think before you speak
Rely on first impressions
Love yourself if no one else will
(Be your own best friend, confide in yourself and embrace)

Live like you won’t be tomorrow
Love all you can
Make yourself happy
(please yourself above all others)

Never be sad, never get mad
Useless emotions are too much
If you don’t use it you loose it
Smile before you become depressed.
Smile today, smile tomorrow
Love always.

it doesnt really flow..ermm when i read it its like stall

what I'm thinking is..it would have a lot of odd pauses ennit...but that would make it...flow...yeah. thankoo.

its seems kind of forced.....ermm

This reeks with cliche.

to blatent it sucks massivley

I don't want to in any way want this to have to be deciphered. I wanted it to be blunt, and if that means cliche` then that's alright.

There has never been a good song written by an 11 year old, you aren't going to change that.

Twelve, mister "I'm in highschool I can count!" *rolls eyes and laughs*

What does that have to do with my ability to count?
I guess that explains why I have to sit through 180 days of AP Stat next year :rolleyes:

Counting-- you were a year off, numbnuts.

It only deals with counting if he knows when you were born. And then it only deals with counting if you're too stupid to know how to subtract. You lose.

Did you lay out the years you were alive in front of me? If not, then at no point did I have to "count", it was more of a guess, based on your maturity level and sh*tty song writing skills.

You're all so down on everything :laughing: leave thee thread alone if it's just for argumentitive sake.

Oh and it says my birthdate in my profile.

oh my but the song is horrid

Date of Birth:
September 21

Gee bill, we're both so stupid. :rolleyes:

You must be specific next time, he vaguely does know when I was born. Plus the phrase "12 year old" has been brought up numerous times on this forum as an insult to me, one would only assume he's heard it before.

It's funny that you really care about that one year.
I doubt he cares enough store your age away in his memory.

Of course I care about that one year, as it's my life. If I did not have that one year I would not have one year more, etc. Connect the dots.
Nor do I want him to care--him caring about me would be scary, as I don't particularly fancy him much.

I meant it's silly to care about how old people think you are. It really doesn't matter.

But anyways, Stop writing. Start reading. Try again in three years when obtain the ability to have feelings and a more interesting view on the world.

i dont remeber when i was 1 or 2 or 3.. thats theree years odnt matter to me

I'm messed in the head, what can I say?

No thanks, I'll keep on. Who says I don't read? Why should I care? HAA. */slap in the face*.

are you positive about that, its a solid fact



how you gon go telling her not to write anymore, and when to start again. what the fuck is this shit. Don't post in her thread then. And obviously she has feelings, it ain't hard to realize that.

Yes. 100% positive fact.

Red = what should be changed or taken out.

I rather enjoyed it tho... Just because it doesn't flow when reading it doesn't mean anything.. When songs are put to music it can change everything..When I was growing up, I was happy, and then I had my very emotional depressing moments, I was very aware of my feelings.. Don't tell someone to wait a few years till they can feel.. when you have no idea what there life has been like. You don't have to be 14 to have emotions.

^ delvolped emotions at least

thank you much Sab =] & real eyes.

Mikey take your own advice and STFU ;]

mmm

i think poetry or whatever this is should have like.. metaphores and stuff.. and when you have so many brackets everything's so explained and everything's so easy to understand that it's not called song writing or whatever this is.
it's just writing stuff everyone knows and put them on seperate lines
which is not art.. at least not in this case

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:D

show me

I don't have to show you dumbass, think about what I said is 100% fact, and then tell me a way to "show you"

Reasons why moses doesn't post songs in the song thread:

1. shit like this could happen

2. I don't write much

3. It's my song right? I'll share it if I want to.

4. song threads=chance to be an attention whore


the song sucks, now shut up kthxbai

the way you said it, 100% positive fact, to me and most means you sure about that. And since you can't show me it makes it an opinion or hypothesis/assumption

Are you really this stupid? Please, I hope not.
The way to prove this to you, is to find every song ever written by an 11 year old.
How about YOU do it. I'll wait.
Quit trying desperatly to sound smart.

Im not the one trying to bring down a youngin by assuming shit, saying stained shit about it being a fact. Hun, this aint about me trying to sound smart, im just trying to tell you not to talk out your ass

I'm not assuming, I already told you it was 100% fact.

How do you know this, you havent read every fucking song written by 11 yr olds

still havent done this yet, so its an hypothesis you are speaking of

How do you know that little girl?

Im not a lil ****ing girl mane