You're just jealous because you can't write at all. Don't take your anger out on everyone else because you have no talent to write lyrics, Bungalow, hahahahahahahahaha!LOL

I see you changed accounts.
Its funny when people can't take a critism.

like i said before it is still first copy, any one can help me here, some advice on to inprove

Burn it in a big fire. And while the fire is still burning throw yourself in it. That should take care of two problems in the world.

Yeah, that would be my second post genius.

any can help me, beside those two

There is no two accounts, you stupid moron. You're just to stupid to realize that we're friends. Maybe you are the one with something to hide with you're remarks and hatred of others. Why don't you try to write your own stuff to post on here. And don't ask me about me posting my lyrics, because I will when I get them done. So put that in your pipe and smoke it.

You won't get nicer replies.
I had to really hold back to avoid telling you that that piece of music (if I can call it that) is the most horrible piece of shit, cheesefest attempt at writing that I have ever seen.

I'm not bungalow (for many reasons, mainly my penis is bigger). But this is proof that me > you

http://musicbanter.com/showthread.php?t=16079 and

www.mosesandtherubberducky.youaremight.com

and look what your's gets http://www.ZeppelinAir.youaremighty.com

Bungalow, why is it that you can get away with being so rude, stupid, arrogant, and just down right ****ty, yet the rest of us get warned or banned? Does anyone else notice this?