DontRunMeOver

That chorus is nice. The 2nd and 3rd line are absolutely ace, as is the rhyming with 'necklace' and 'wreckless', although maybe you should lose the word 'stupid' (replace it with a different word if you like) because the rest of the lyric isn't about anything stupid, so the is misplaced.

"You and lust has made us reckless"

Or something like that.

Although I felt the need to add the correction, I can't overemphasise how much I liked the phrase

"She's pulling on my heartstrings
I'm pulling on her necklace"

Keeping it physical! Yeah!

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