Die Quietly Please (lyrics, songs, hands)

TrampInaTux · 06-01-2006, 11:23 AM

A silhouette of what we used to be
The outline of your frame, child, is tragic
Caught between the fence undecided where to leap
Then they realise his childhood they can't keep

Oh the years have been so cruel
Playing us all for fools
Die quietly please.

A memento from a simpler time
Photographic evidence of a smile
When the morning breaks I will still be by your side
Not through choice I've got nowhere else to hide

Oh the years have been so cruel
Playing us all for fools
Die quietly please.

A gateway which I can laugh and pretend
That my world is from its end
Hands behind my back facing the wall
Everyone around me but no one to call

Oh the years have been so cruel
playing us all for fools
Die quietly please.

Oh the years have been unkind
Tricking all of our minds
Bringing me to my knees.

Oh the years have been so cruel
playing us all for fools
Die quietly please.

My most personal lyrics so far... quite hard to write, but I did enjoy it and I've got a lot off my mind writing this which is always a good thing. Please comment

sleepy jack · 06-01-2006, 05:33 PM

I like it, like normally stuff like this is cliche but you wrote it in a very non-cliche way. Its good

Real_Eyez_C_Real_Lies · 06-01-2006, 06:54 PM

mm, sorry, but i don't understand this, care to explain

Winter · 06-02-2006, 02:53 AM

Lol, were you crying and slitting your wrists while writing this?

Your breaking my heart.

TrampInaTux · 06-02-2006, 03:05 AM

Surely you can't write with slit wrists?

Anyways, its a saddening song but like I said it got it off my mind. Even if it is very emo-ish.

Winter · 06-02-2006, 08:35 AM

Good point, maybe you had 3 hands or something

Honest lyrics are always good, and well done for keeping the lyrics clean, not many people nowa days can write lyrics without saying the f*kc word or the s*it word in every sentance.

TrampInaTux · 06-02-2006, 12:44 PM

I use them a lot, but they never suited this song so I left them out.

And yes I have 3 songs, but the 3rd one is always busy....

Winter · 06-02-2006, 01:51 PM

I assume you mean 3 hands? - Man wouldn't it be brilliant to actully have 3 hands, 3 girls and 3 pus... Ill stop there.

wordiva · 06-10-2006, 02:10 PM

Captivating!!! There is nothing else i can say.

06-01-2006, 11:23 AM	#1 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Die Quietly Please A silhouette of what we used to be The outline of your frame, child, is tragic Caught between the fence undecided where to leap Then they realise his childhood they can't keep Oh the years have been so cruel Playing us all for fools Die quietly please. A memento from a simpler time Photographic evidence of a smile When the morning breaks I will still be by your side Not through choice I've got nowhere else to hide Oh the years have been so cruel Playing us all for fools Die quietly please. A gateway which I can laugh and pretend That my world is from its end Hands behind my back facing the wall Everyone around me but no one to call Oh the years have been so cruel playing us all for fools Die quietly please. Oh the years have been unkind Tricking all of our minds Bringing me to my knees. Oh the years have been so cruel playing us all for fools Die quietly please. My most personal lyrics so far... quite hard to write, but I did enjoy it and I've got a lot off my mind writing this which is always a good thing. Please comment

06-01-2006, 06:54 PM	#3 (permalink)
Real_Eyez_C_Real_Lies lickin honey from a thorn Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 62	mm, sorry, but i don't understand this, care to explain __________________ My Real eyez see through your liez Be very carful not to make a woman cry because God counts her tears. The woman came out of a man's rib. Not from his feet to be walked on. Not from his head to be superior. But from the side to be equal. Under the arm to be protected and next to the heart to be loved.

06-10-2006, 02:10 PM	#9 (permalink)
wordiva Groupie Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 5	Captivating!!! There is nothing else i can say. __________________ !!!!!!!!!!!!

06-02-2006, 02:53 AM	#4 (permalink)
Winter Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: The Darkest Coldest Place Posts: 94	Lol, were you crying and slitting your wrists while writing this? Your breaking my heart.

06-02-2006, 03:05 AM	#5 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Surely you can't write with slit wrists? Anyways, its a saddening song but like I said it got it off my mind. Even if it is very emo-ish.

06-02-2006, 08:35 AM	#6 (permalink)
Winter Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: The Darkest Coldest Place Posts: 94	Good point, maybe you had 3 hands or something Honest lyrics are always good, and well done for keeping the lyrics clean, not many people nowa days can write lyrics without saying the fkc word or the sit word in every sentance.

06-02-2006, 12:44 PM	#7 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	I use them a lot, but they never suited this song so I left them out. And yes I have 3 songs, but the 3rd one is always busy....

06-02-2006, 01:51 PM	#8 (permalink)
Winter Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: The Darkest Coldest Place Posts: 94	I assume you mean 3 hands? - Man wouldn't it be brilliant to actully have 3 hands, 3 girls and 3 pus... Ill stop there.