Rolling Blues
 

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Sometimes it feels like I dont have a purpose
Like nothing inside has any worth
Like all I do is feel what hurts
But I cant point a finger

The lonely blues are the coldest
I find love but I cant hold it
It slips through my grip and is stolen
And like a rock, the blues start rollin

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what the hell inspired that, it is pretty good

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It can use some work. Also might I suggest (so it has more content to it). www.dictionary.com and www.thesaurus.com .