Radio Silence (show, quote, Hang)

LostPhil · 05-21-2006, 11:58 AM

subtelty's an art which I haven't yet mastered,
my feelings declared with a sigle blast,
a deafening blow for my listeners tuned in
to the late night show broadcasted last

radio silence
static can be heard
the mic's turned off
for the sake of the station governed by a madman

the listeners flee with no hesitation,
my ratings fall and hit the floor
I'm left standing with nothing to do,
but leave my heart and lock the door

radio silence
static can be heard
the mic's turned off
for the sake of the station governed by a madman

with my outlet shut
and left to burn
I'm set free but
nowhere to turn

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Well, this is my first attempt and would appreciate any feedback. I just thought of the first line while thinking of a messenger display name and went with it from there. Only a first draft that I'll probably adapt once I try and sing it.

LostPhil · 05-22-2006, 10:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LostPhil

with my outlet shut
and left to burn
I'm set free but
nowhere to turn

I've just realised that I'm not being set free at all so I'm going to have to change the last part. Apart from that, any thoughts?

05-21-2006, 11:58 AM	#1 (permalink)
LostPhil Groupie Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 14	Radio Silence subtelty's an art which I haven't yet mastered, my feelings declared with a sigle blast, a deafening blow for my listeners tuned in to the late night show broadcasted last radio silence static can be heard the mic's turned off for the sake of the station governed by a madman the listeners flee with no hesitation, my ratings fall and hit the floor I'm left standing with nothing to do, but leave my heart and lock the door radio silence static can be heard the mic's turned off for the sake of the station governed by a madman with my outlet shut and left to burn I'm set free but nowhere to turn --------------------------------- Well, this is my first attempt and would appreciate any feedback. I just thought of the first line while thinking of a messenger display name and went with it from there. Only a first draft that I'll probably adapt once I try and sing it. __________________ Bonnie: Somebody save him, he can't swim! Peter: Oh, he's not even kicking. Kick Joe, kick. Lois: Peter, he's a paraplegic! Peter: That doesn't mean he can't hear. Kick Joe, kick!