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LostPhil 05-21-2006 10:58 AM

Radio Silence
 
subtelty's an art which I haven't yet mastered,
my feelings declared with a sigle blast,
a deafening blow for my listeners tuned in
to the late night show broadcasted last

radio silence
static can be heard
the mic's turned off
for the sake of the station governed by a madman

the listeners flee with no hesitation,
my ratings fall and hit the floor
I'm left standing with nothing to do,
but leave my heart and lock the door

radio silence
static can be heard
the mic's turned off
for the sake of the station governed by a madman

with my outlet shut
and left to burn
I'm set free but
nowhere to turn

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Well, this is my first attempt and would appreciate any feedback. I just thought of the first line while thinking of a messenger display name and went with it from there. Only a first draft that I'll probably adapt once I try and sing it.

LostPhil 05-22-2006 09:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LostPhil
with my outlet shut
and left to burn
I'm set free but
nowhere to turn

I've just realised that I'm not being set free at all so I'm going to have to change the last part. Apart from that, any thoughts?


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