Another New Direction (song)

TrampInaTux · 05-21-2006, 01:57 AM

I went wild inside, please believe me
I might not act the type but I am not stone
she made the move first and I didn't know what to do
the only reason I'm backing down is cos I love you
please believe me, I would never harm y'

Can we not talk of this? It makes me feel awkward
I know it is all my fault and you should know I feel awful
It happened all so suddenly what was I meant to do?
It's not like I retaliated, I pulled away very soon
please believe me, I would never harm y'

Another new direction I'm going in. Only 2 verses so far, but tell me whether you like it or not so I can see whether this is a direction I could possibly take with my music.

angel18 · 05-21-2006, 06:57 AM

I like it Hobo. I think you should fit a Chorus in, it's a good song.
But the Chorus has to be right to be honest! 4/5 ****

05-21-2006, 01:57 AM	#1 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Another New Direction I went wild inside, please believe me I might not act the type but I am not stone she made the move first and I didn't know what to do the only reason I'm backing down is cos I love you please believe me, I would never harm y' Can we not talk of this? It makes me feel awkward I know it is all my fault and you should know I feel awful It happened all so suddenly what was I meant to do? It's not like I retaliated, I pulled away very soon please believe me, I would never harm y' Another new direction I'm going in. Only 2 verses so far, but tell me whether you like it or not so I can see whether this is a direction I could possibly take with my music.

05-21-2006, 06:57 AM	#2 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	I like it Hobo. I think you should fit a Chorus in, it's a good song. But the Chorus has to be right to be honest! 4/5 ****