A place of burial :by:MJSM (dancing, albums)

explosions-in-my-pants · 05-16-2006, 10:57 PM

I don’t want to give up, but I don’t want to fake it
I’m scared of falling apart again
I can’t hold the pieces together
Can we go back to the beginning?
I can’t stay this way forever

Save me now…
Can we make forever start today?

(Course)
Lay the flower on the grave
Say someday it will all be ok
Lay my hand on yours
Maybe someday it will all be ok?

(Course)
I know we can’t end something that hasn’t begun
But I can’t move on, I can’t pretend
I’m sorry but I just can’t be friends

Here is the story of each other
When were we ever together?
Was there ever a forever

(Course)
Lay the flower on the grave
Say someday it will all be ok
Lay my hand on yours
Maybe someday it will all be ok?

I should have listened to everyone
I had to do this on my own
I couldn’t leave better enough alone
Now look what I’ve done

Please don’t let go its ripping me apart
My place of burial is in your heart
Forever is a grave apart
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Now rip it apart...

the only real part i like in it is:

"Please don't let go its ripping me apart
my place of burial is in your heart
forever is a grave apart."

MURDER JUNKIE · 05-17-2006, 12:01 AM

What does the MJ stand for?

MURDER JUNKIE?

Crowe · 05-17-2006, 01:08 AM

It's called a chorus homie.

blackTshirt · 05-17-2006, 02:04 AM

every line is one big cliche

~~bungalow~~ · 05-17-2006, 07:05 AM

A suckity bowl of sucking suck.

Honestly. Cliche. Chorus . Suck. Cliche. Chorus. Suck

TrampInaTux · 05-17-2006, 02:59 PM

Terrible. Awful. Diabolical. Get out. *points to door*

sleepy jack · 05-17-2006, 05:26 PM

I hate to be trendy, but ewww for all the reasons above.

Real_Eyez_C_Real_Lies · 05-17-2006, 08:32 PM

woo, try stepping out of the world of platitude, and entering in a world you create on your own. It'll take long ass stepping, but it's worth it.

but, then again it has a chance of blowin up. I mean, look at them Pussy Cat dolls...but it might take some exotic dancing from you, your choice...

Laces Out Dan! · 05-17-2006, 08:33 PM

! This is bad news man...like 80% is all cliche

Real_Eyez_C_Real_Lies · 05-17-2006, 08:36 PM

Shes a man

. Sorry hun, never mind about that dancing, they already got Olivia and Ciara doing that.

just playing

05-16-2006, 10:57 PM	#1 (permalink)
explosions-in-my-pants angel of tragic days Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 924	A place of burial :by:MJSM I don’t want to give up, but I don’t want to fake it I’m scared of falling apart again I can’t hold the pieces together Can we go back to the beginning? I can’t stay this way forever Save me now… Can we make forever start today? (Course) Lay the flower on the grave Say someday it will all be ok Lay my hand on yours Maybe someday it will all be ok? (Course) I know we can’t end something that hasn’t begun But I can’t move on, I can’t pretend I’m sorry but I just can’t be friends Here is the story of each other When were we ever together? Was there ever a forever (Course) Lay the flower on the grave Say someday it will all be ok Lay my hand on yours Maybe someday it will all be ok? I should have listened to everyone I had to do this on my own I couldn’t leave better enough alone Now look what I’ve done Please don’t let go its ripping me apart My place of burial is in your heart Forever is a grave apart --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Now rip it apart... the only real part i like in it is: "Please don't let go its ripping me apart my place of burial is in your heart forever is a grave apart."

05-17-2006, 01:08 AM	#3 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	It's called a chorus homie. __________________

05-17-2006, 02:04 AM	#4 (permalink)
blackTshirt The Randomness Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: romania.. shut up Posts: 854	every line is one big cliche __________________ My rims never spin, to the contrary You'll find that they're quite stationary.

05-17-2006, 08:32 PM	#8 (permalink)
Real_Eyez_C_Real_Lies lickin honey from a thorn Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 62	woo, try stepping out of the world of platitude, and entering in a world you create on your own. It'll take long ass stepping, but it's worth it. but, then again it has a chance of blowin up. I mean, look at them Pussy Cat dolls...but it might take some exotic dancing from you, your choice... __________________ My Real eyez see through your liez Be very carful not to make a woman cry because God counts her tears. The woman came out of a man's rib. Not from his feet to be walked on. Not from his head to be superior. But from the side to be equal. Under the arm to be protected and next to the heart to be loved.

05-17-2006, 08:33 PM	#9 (permalink)
Laces Out Dan! I love Puck Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: British Columbia Posts: 4,614	! This is bad news man...like 80% is all cliche __________________ We are entirely smooth, We admit to the truth, We are the best at what we do.

05-17-2006, 12:01 AM	#2 (permalink)
MURDER JUNKIE The Wetter The Better!! Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: SH1TTY London Ontario Canada Posts: 2,504	What does the MJ stand for? MURDER JUNKIE?

05-17-2006, 07:05 AM	#5 (permalink)
~~bungalow~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Hot-lanta Posts: 3,140	A suckity bowl of sucking suck. Honestly. Cliche. Chorus . Suck. Cliche. Chorus. Suck

05-17-2006, 02:59 PM	#6 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Terrible. Awful. Diabolical. Get out. points to door

05-17-2006, 08:36 PM	#10 (permalink)
Real_Eyez_C_Real_Lies lickin honey from a thorn Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 62	Shes a man . Sorry hun, never mind about that dancing, they already got Olivia and Ciara doing that. just playing __________________ My Real eyez see through your liez Be very carful not to make a woman cry because God counts her tears. The woman came out of a man's rib. Not from his feet to be walked on. Not from his head to be superior. But from the side to be equal. Under the arm to be protected and next to the heart to be loved.