OMGZORZ moses is posting a song... (punk)

mosesandtherubberducky · 05-12-2006, 11:46 PM

not really just a little blurb i came up with before I got in the shower the other night. I was wondering what the great MB community would say. And if you say anything that isn't constructive critisim I take the liberity to start sending you shock sites and trojans/viruses/worms and don't think I can't I've got wikipedia and IRC on my side.

*busts out notepad*
So pull the plug and cut the wires,
Because we're gonna drown,
Sever all ties with an electric fire,
You ideas are so profound,
Watch your back because no one will,
Say something now as you swallow your dying pill,

that's all of it for now if you guys think it could be worked out into something I'll keep going and if you flame I won't post another attempt at a song :P I'll just start talking about linux codes and make threads that only me and ArmyofMe can talking :P

sleepy jack · 05-13-2006, 12:04 AM

I like it, the ending could probaly be worked on a bit though.

rudgrljungalist · 05-13-2006, 02:21 AM

Seems like a good foundation. What does it sound like in your head? I'm imagining it's kind of punk-sounding. I think playing around with the wording could make it tighter. Anyhow, good luck!

05-12-2006, 11:46 PM	#1 (permalink)
mosesandtherubberducky butt say x Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: so i read the question as "Where YOU live" which was kinda funny instead of "Where you live" Posts: 1,649	OMGZORZ moses is posting a song... not really just a little blurb i came up with before I got in the shower the other night. I was wondering what the great MB community would say. And if you say anything that isn't constructive critisim I take the liberity to start sending you shock sites and trojans/viruses/worms and don't think I can't I've got wikipedia and IRC on my side. busts out notepad So pull the plug and cut the wires, Because we're gonna drown, Sever all ties with an electric fire, You ideas are so profound, Watch your back because no one will, Say something now as you swallow your dying pill, that's all of it for now if you guys think it could be worked out into something I'll keep going and if you flame I won't post another attempt at a song :P I'll just start talking about linux codes and make threads that only me and ArmyofMe can talking :P __________________ Can I have a youtube video for a sig? There's a thing that says "Wrap [YOUTUBE] tags around selected text"

05-13-2006, 02:21 AM	#3 (permalink)
rudgrljungalist Purple monkey dishwasher Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: London, On, Canada Posts: 95	Seems like a good foundation. What does it sound like in your head? I'm imagining it's kind of punk-sounding. I think playing around with the wording could make it tighter. Anyhow, good luck! __________________ Everywhere I travel, tiny life. Single-serving sugar, single-serving cream, single pat of butter. The microwave Cordon Bleu hobby kit. Shampoo-conditioner combos, sample-packaged mouthwash, tiny bars of soap. The people I meet on each flight? They're single-serving friends.