HAHAHAHAHA (I'm proud of this one.....READ)
 

I'm trying my best but she just can't see it
I should cut out my rest I'm starting to get unfit
Here goes my new day with a brand new job
with a boss that hates my guts
C'mon people make a fuss of me

CHORUS
It's me birthday
Happy ****ing birthday
on a work day
Poxey ****ing work day
It's me birthday
Happy ****ing birthday
on a work day
poxey ****ing work day
Oh happy birthday to me

I stomp back home for a powernap
and I get divorce papers thrown on my lap
What a nice present, thank you dear
You don't need to explain the message is pretty clear
you all just have a ****ing problem

CHORUS
It's me birthday
Happy ****ing birthday
on a work day
poxey ****ing work day
it's me birthday
happy ****ing birthday
on a work day
poxey ****ing work day
Oh happy birthday to me

I got a parking fine for fifty quid
the cats got in the dustbin I never closed the lid
My laptop broke I've lost all the work I've did
my ex-lesbian-wife is pregnant with my kid
You try and tell me you had a worse day

CHORUS
It's me birthday
Happy ****ing birthday
on a work day
poxey ****ing work day
it's me birthday
happy ****ing birthday
on a work day
poxey ****ing work day
Oh happy birthday to me


Like the title says, I'm proud of this one. Any ways I can make it better? This is one I'm seriously thinking about keeping for the long haul when I try and follow my dreams of being in a band.

LOL, I can't think of anything to go along with this, but nice job! :rofl:

Maybe a few too many F******* for commercial use?

GT

Commercialisation can suck my ****ing balls.

I like the stanzas(except the last lines in each), but i dont like the chorus.

i agree with crazy luv some of the last lines for the stanzas just don't go right for me

It would be awesome if sung by this guy:

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f3...p/0002002v.jpg


The loveable loser

i don't like this at all hobo, if ****ing wasn't even there it would seem like a very catchy annoying music channel song.. that would get annoying fast to many lsiteners... i think its the chourse personally thay just bugs me. and then the second last lines before the ending of the last chourse just seems well like rap?

*sighs* oh well I guess this song will have to be sang by the loveable loser indeed.

It could also be sang by the loveable loser brother....but ugly

http://www.moonbattery.com/archives/bum.jpg