Anyone can write a Bible (single, member, title, songs)

TrampInaTux · 04-15-2006, 03:43 PM

I'm fine
It's all part of my design
Sublime
on the edge walking the line
Fear
is another word for love
Tears
I can't get enough of

When you do something special
only then will we remember you
and until that day shall come
to the whole world you're forgotten

He's gone
My blood, my bone, my heart, my skin
Rotten scum
Filthy hands they killed him
Bitter pulse
Don't ever want to look up
End result
Broken home and ****ed up life

Oh he did something special
he improved all our lives
but I guess it wasn't that special
in God's bastard eyes

swim · 04-15-2006, 05:40 PM

nice, no single thing sticks out as good or bad it's all kind of dependent on each other so as a whole it turns out to be something pretty good.
and the title is pretty cool.

Merkaba · 04-15-2006, 08:33 PM

I love this hobo. Theres a crap load of adjectives yet it still flows pretty well.

Thats pretty much all I have to say.

TrampInaTux · 04-16-2006, 04:34 AM

Cheers, glad you criticised nout cos I'm sick as **** about changing me songs...

04-15-2006, 03:43 PM	#1 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Anyone can write a Bible I'm fine It's all part of my design Sublime on the edge walking the line Fear is another word for love Tears I can't get enough of When you do something special only then will we remember you and until that day shall come to the whole world you're forgotten He's gone My blood, my bone, my heart, my skin Rotten scum Filthy hands they killed him Bitter pulse Don't ever want to look up End result Broken home and ****ed up life Oh he did something special he improved all our lives but I guess it wasn't that special in God's bastard eyes

04-15-2006, 08:33 PM	#3 (permalink)
Merkaba Whitewater! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: New Zealand Posts: 2,885	I love this hobo. Theres a crap load of adjectives yet it still flows pretty well. Thats pretty much all I have to say. __________________ She thinks I'm a reclusive genius, she's going to be very disappointed when she finds out i'm a reclusive wanker

04-15-2006, 05:40 PM	#2 (permalink)
swim dontcareaboutyou Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: North Carolina Posts: 5,188	nice, no single thing sticks out as good or bad it's all kind of dependent on each other so as a whole it turns out to be something pretty good. and the title is pretty cool.

04-16-2006, 04:34 AM	#4 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Cheers, glad you criticised nout cos I'm sick as **** about changing me songs...