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shatteredheartfallendream · 04-19-2006, 01:26 PM

there's nothing wrong with the way you write your poetry. (note: Keyword: YOUR) If you like it, it really doesn't matter.

skiesofganymede · 04-19-2006, 05:38 PM

Haha, I never like my songs. But I have degrees of being okay with them.

littleknowitall · 04-19-2006, 06:09 PM

i liked it, and im not lying, this is the first time i've bothered posting in this section because a) unless i really genuiely think something is good i won't bother posting.
b) (and there is no offense intended with this) i haven't seen much else i've really liked on this thing, i'll admit i haven't made much of an effort to look but still.

so be happy, your lyrics are much appreciated by somebody (namely me).

skiesofganymede · 04-19-2006, 06:12 PM

hey thanks man

littleknowitall · 04-19-2006, 06:13 PM

s'alright

TrampInaTux · 04-20-2006, 02:26 AM

I'm suprised. Most people start off bad songwriters on here then gradually become better and better as they receive more advice. But you've started off good. Now I'll admit that this isn't my preferred style of writing to review but I'll review it through the eyes of someone who would like this thing-it's very passionate, good imagery and nice use of words. Overall, good.

04-19-2006, 01:26 PM	#1 (permalink)
shatteredheartfallendream Groupie Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: A place called nowhere (in other words ask) Posts: 39	there's nothing wrong with the way you write your poetry. (note: Keyword: YOUR) If you like it, it really doesn't matter. __________________ If you look into a mirror, holding a dozen roses, you will see 13 of the most beautiful things.

04-19-2006, 05:38 PM	#2 (permalink)
skiesofganymede Groupie Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 27	Haha, I never like my songs. But I have degrees of being okay with them.

04-19-2006, 06:09 PM	#3 (permalink)
littleknowitall Pow! Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 1,673	i liked it, and im not lying, this is the first time i've bothered posting in this section because a) unless i really genuiely think something is good i won't bother posting. b) (and there is no offense intended with this) i haven't seen much else i've really liked on this thing, i'll admit i haven't made much of an effort to look but still. so be happy, your lyrics are much appreciated by somebody (namely me).

04-19-2006, 06:12 PM	#4 (permalink)
skiesofganymede Groupie Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 27	hey thanks man

04-19-2006, 06:13 PM	#5 (permalink)
littleknowitall Pow! Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 1,673	s'alright

04-20-2006, 02:26 AM	#6 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,412	I'm suprised. Most people start off bad songwriters on here then gradually become better and better as they receive more advice. But you've started off good. Now I'll admit that this isn't my preferred style of writing to review but I'll review it through the eyes of someone who would like this thing-it's very passionate, good imagery and nice use of words. Overall, good.