I'm thinking about it

TrampInaTux · 04-11-2006, 06:40 AM

I'm thinking bout going home
Maybe you would like to join me
A girl like you shouldn't be alone
A guy like me should get in for free
What's your price, love? Really that much?
Sorry darling I ain't got enough
Maybe we should watch TV instead
Don't worry there's a TV in my bedroom

I'm thinking bout undressing
I'll pull down your skirt love no messing
Bad girls like you should be taught a lesson
My wife will be home soon so no carressing
What, you don't want to? You don't have a choice
I'll only be 2 minutes just keep down your voice
Then you can go home and you won't say a word
Cos slappers like you, no, they don't get heard

Only 2 verses so far then, but what do you all think at the moment? Any ideas for a third verse?

angel18 · 04-11-2006, 12:03 PM

i like it. flow is nice! i haven't any ideas at the moment to help!

Crazy Luv · 04-12-2006, 04:16 AM

i like this one too. hmph, doing a good job. but i dont like these lines in the 1st stanza...
Maybe we should watch TV instead
Don't worry there's a TV in my bedroom

TrampInaTux · 04-12-2006, 04:33 AM

The 'room' in the bedroom line is supposed to be echoed out. It works, trust me.

Crazy Luv · 04-12-2006, 04:40 AM

...riiiiiiiiight. well for now, unless i hear it myself, i still stick with my opinion.

well off to ****ing school, oh the joy...

04-11-2006, 06:40 AM	#1 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	I'm thinking about it I'm thinking bout going home Maybe you would like to join me A girl like you shouldn't be alone A guy like me should get in for free What's your price, love? Really that much? Sorry darling I ain't got enough Maybe we should watch TV instead Don't worry there's a TV in my bedroom I'm thinking bout undressing I'll pull down your skirt love no messing Bad girls like you should be taught a lesson My wife will be home soon so no carressing What, you don't want to? You don't have a choice I'll only be 2 minutes just keep down your voice Then you can go home and you won't say a word Cos slappers like you, no, they don't get heard Only 2 verses so far then, but what do you all think at the moment? Any ideas for a third verse?

04-11-2006, 12:03 PM	#2 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	i like it. flow is nice! i haven't any ideas at the moment to help!

04-12-2006, 04:16 AM	#3 (permalink)
Crazy Luv a l'amou fou pou tout Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Posts: 355	i like this one too. hmph, doing a good job. but i dont like these lines in the 1st stanza... Maybe we should watch TV instead Don't worry there's a TV in my bedroom

04-12-2006, 04:33 AM	#4 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	The 'room' in the bedroom line is supposed to be echoed out. It works, trust me.

04-12-2006, 04:40 AM	#5 (permalink)
Crazy Luv a l'amou fou pou tout Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Posts: 355	...riiiiiiiiight. well for now, unless i hear it myself, i still stick with my opinion. well off to ****ing school, oh the joy...