Remember (rap, Kiss, performance, song, Hang)

Mr Slogan · 03-28-2006, 12:48 AM

Knock, knock- who's there?
It's me i'm trying to open ya mind.

I've got the remote-moving in the motion
of fast-forward - n - rewind.

I've got my traveling shoes
-n- laced tight care 2 join me?

all equipment needed for the hike
pre=pared for this journey.

We going back in time to correct
what you've missed.

From your touch to ya smell
and even your 1st kiss.

Don't be afraid, don't shiver
there's no more time 4 your tear.

It's time to grow up, be Grown
and face your main fear.

Stand on some choices you made
relieve yourself of pressure and guilt.

I'm saying, get ya-self together
-n- stop crying over spilled milk.

your family was un-fare
and you say they treated you wrong.

But you got through them times
you still living-so keep movin on.

Ex-lovers did'nt care- and you say that they
were showing you this.

If you could change it- i know u would
But baby it's only a myth.

You're past isn't perfect-
you did'nt something now it's back 2 haunt you.

You get the Boomerang- it's your turn
to face the bitter truth.

It's hard to remember all the things
that happened in your life.

The Good or The Bad.
It was a portion of your slice.

We all gamble in this world
and concious voices

We rise We fall. but it's
because of our own choices.

Accept your faults-don't give up or surrender.
Pump ya breaks- 4 a second- take a glance

Can u remember?

Py?on ya heard me

Laces Out Dan! · 03-28-2006, 12:49 AM

Im sorry ..... but WTF is this ...

DontRunMeOver · 03-28-2006, 03:06 AM

This is good, nice rhyming and I can imagine how it works in performance. Well, I'm assuming its a rap as there isn't a chorus, but maybe it would also work as a song.

Sorry, got to go. No more details for now.

angel18 · 03-28-2006, 03:20 AM

nice one mr slogan have you thought about my idea? let me know!

03-28-2006, 12:48 AM	#1 (permalink)
Mr Slogan Groupie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Dirty South, Marrero/New Orleans. LA Posts: 22	Remember Knock, knock- who's there? It's me i'm trying to open ya mind. I've got the remote-moving in the motion of fast-forward - n - rewind. I've got my traveling shoes -n- laced tight care 2 join me? all equipment needed for the hike pre=pared for this journey. We going back in time to correct what you've missed. From your touch to ya smell and even your 1st kiss. Don't be afraid, don't shiver there's no more time 4 your tear. It's time to grow up, be Grown and face your main fear. Stand on some choices you made relieve yourself of pressure and guilt. I'm saying, get ya-self together -n- stop crying over spilled milk. your family was un-fare and you say they treated you wrong. But you got through them times you still living-so keep movin on. Ex-lovers did'nt care- and you say that they were showing you this. If you could change it- i know u would But baby it's only a myth. You're past isn't perfect- you did'nt something now it's back 2 haunt you. You get the Boomerang- it's your turn to face the bitter truth. It's hard to remember all the things that happened in your life. The Good or The Bad. It was a portion of your slice. We all gamble in this world and concious voices We rise We fall. but it's because of our own choices. Accept your faults-don't give up or surrender. Pump ya breaks- 4 a second- take a glance Can u remember? Py?on ya heard me

03-28-2006, 12:49 AM	#2 (permalink)
Laces Out Dan! I love Puck Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: British Columbia Posts: 4,614	Im sorry ..... but WTF is this ... __________________ We are entirely smooth, We admit to the truth, We are the best at what we do.

03-28-2006, 03:20 AM	#4 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	nice one mr slogan have you thought about my idea? let me know!