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still trying to figure out a title
Hey I've been trying to write a bit more lately and this is what I got. I'm open (really open) to suggestions for titles so any ideas are appreciated
--------------------------------- So shall we let these dogs lie? Or shoot them while they sleep? It feels as if the mistrust and the disgust Is worth avoiding some bites And some blood Nothing, nothing seems safe without reason to run you left me a fear in the streets a danger in the home and your only companion as you proclaim youre alone And now those dying dogs howl at more than the sky nothing, nothing seems safe without reason to die a sweet and savage siren song the deceitful salvage of a long dead threat deny your father with brittle lies while our fair lady spoils your goodbyes with her debts ive found myself a reason to run, to die to forget my misfortunes dont forget to give her a kiss tonight -------------------------------------------- ideas for titles? crits? its all good |
Ok I honestly can't understand this at all. Please explain?
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sorry youre gonna have to be a bit more specific
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how about "fido plays dead for real" of course that may just be wishful thinking
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k I keep reading this and each time I can't figure out what it's about?
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its about trying to overlook your morals so that you can get to what you want, and then finally understanding that its not worth it in the end, because if something seems to good to be true, it probably is. Then theres the last little bit which is sorta about being able to accept the fact that you cant get what you want and others can
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k now I understand!
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