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~~bungalow~~ · 03-19-2006, 03:34 PM

I think you're the one who needs to shut his mouth.
If you want to improve your writing, then why would you post a song that you know isn't your best?
Why get one that you already have the ability to improve upon, critisized?
Put up a song that you feel represents your best effort, and then get ways to improve upon that. And you could also stop being a sexist ****. That may help.

Dead Eternity · 03-19-2006, 03:39 PM

I wasn't being sexist, your a confused little person.

I posted one of my mediocre songs so I could see how that turns out. I've posted my best stuff online before and its gotten stolen by other bands that I know. To me it looks like your too stupid to realize that people steal, and if I posted my best, the opportunity might come up for someone who actually likes it to steal it, your not very smart...

Dead Eternity · 03-19-2006, 03:40 PM

And if your so interested in being a little badass, why don't you ****ing come on AIM so we can have a real discussion you scaredy ass.

~~bungalow~~ · 03-19-2006, 03:41 PM

Noobs are great, arent they!

~~bungalow~~ · 03-19-2006, 03:43 PM

If you dont even think that the song is good, then what makes you think that anyone else will?

Dead Eternity · 03-19-2006, 03:47 PM

Because there are some really lame songs out there that are pretty good. They might not even mean something, but they are someones feelings and/or they just rule.

~~under~~ · 03-19-2006, 06:20 PM

It's not that bad i mean I like how you took the time to think of something like that.

All i'm saying is it's not the best i have seen but it is also pretty good and well thought out so I'm not saying its bad at all.

I think it's good

7/10

Reznorlsave · 03-19-2006, 06:29 PM

I agree, the lyrics are pretty lame oh! But you got guts though!

PerFeCTioNThrUSileNCe · 03-19-2006, 06:30 PM

bungalow, dead eternity....lets keep this clean.

~~under~~ · 03-19-2006, 06:31 PM

I agree with what anyone says because its not the best but its not the worst none the less

03-19-2006, 03:39 PM	#12 (permalink)
Dead Eternity Groupie Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Carpentersville...ughh Posts: 19	I wasn't being sexist, your a confused little person. I posted one of my mediocre songs so I could see how that turns out. I've posted my best stuff online before and its gotten stolen by other bands that I know. To me it looks like your too stupid to realize that people steal, and if I posted my best, the opportunity might come up for someone who actually likes it to steal it, your not very smart... __________________ sorry guys

03-19-2006, 03:40 PM	#13 (permalink)
Dead Eternity Groupie Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Carpentersville...ughh Posts: 19	And if your so interested in being a little badass, why don't you ***ing come on AIM so we can have a real discussion you scaredy ass. __________________ sorry guys*

03-19-2006, 03:47 PM	#16 (permalink)
Dead Eternity Groupie Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Carpentersville...ughh Posts: 19	Because there are some really lame songs out there that are pretty good. They might not even mean something, but they are someones feelings and/or they just rule. __________________ sorry guys

03-19-2006, 06:29 PM	#18 (permalink)
Reznorlsave Groupie Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Roxboro, NC Posts: 15	I agree, the lyrics are pretty lame oh! But you got guts though! __________________ I still recall the taste of your tears Echoing your voice just like the ringing in my ears My favorite dreams of you still wash ashore Scraping through my head till I don't want to sleep anymore!

03-19-2006, 03:34 PM	#11 (permalink)
~~bungalow~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Hot-lanta Posts: 3,140	I think you're the one who needs to shut his mouth. If you want to improve your writing, then why would you post a song that you know isn't your best? Why get one that you already have the ability to improve upon, critisized? Put up a song that you feel represents your best effort, and then get ways to improve upon that. And you could also stop being a sexist ****. That may help.

03-19-2006, 03:41 PM	#14 (permalink)
~~bungalow~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Hot-lanta Posts: 3,140	Noobs are great, arent they!

03-19-2006, 03:43 PM	#15 (permalink)
~~bungalow~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Hot-lanta Posts: 3,140	If you dont even think that the song is good, then what makes you think that anyone else will?

03-19-2006, 06:20 PM	#17 (permalink)
~~under~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 1,056	It's not that bad i mean I like how you took the time to think of something like that. All i'm saying is it's not the best i have seen but it is also pretty good and well thought out so I'm not saying its bad at all. I think it's good 7/10

03-19-2006, 06:31 PM	#20 (permalink)
~~under~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 1,056	I agree with what anyone says because its not the best but its not the worst none the less