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03-19-2006, 04:34 PM | #11 (permalink) |
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I think you're the one who needs to shut his mouth.
If you want to improve your writing, then why would you post a song that you know isn't your best? Why get one that you already have the ability to improve upon, critisized? Put up a song that you feel represents your best effort, and then get ways to improve upon that. And you could also stop being a sexist ****. That may help. |
03-19-2006, 04:39 PM | #12 (permalink) |
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I wasn't being sexist, your a confused little person.
I posted one of my mediocre songs so I could see how that turns out. I've posted my best stuff online before and its gotten stolen by other bands that I know. To me it looks like your too stupid to realize that people steal, and if I posted my best, the opportunity might come up for someone who actually likes it to steal it, your not very smart...
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03-19-2006, 04:47 PM | #16 (permalink) |
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Because there are some really lame songs out there that are pretty good. They might not even mean something, but they are someones feelings and/or they just rule.
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03-19-2006, 07:20 PM | #17 (permalink) |
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It's not that bad i mean I like how you took the time to think of something like that.
All i'm saying is it's not the best i have seen but it is also pretty good and well thought out so I'm not saying its bad at all. I think it's good 7/10 |
03-19-2006, 07:29 PM | #18 (permalink) |
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I agree, the lyrics are pretty lame oh! But you got guts though!
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03-19-2006, 07:30 PM | #19 (permalink) | |
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bungalow, dead eternity....lets keep this clean.
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How'd I end up here to begin with? I don't know. Why do I start what I can't finish? Oh please, don't barrage me with questions to all those ugly answers. My ego's like my stomach- it keeps shitting what I feed it. But maybe I don't want to finish anything anymore.. maybe I can wait in bed 'til she comes home. and whispers.... Quote:
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