I think you're the one who needs to shut his mouth.
If you want to improve your writing, then why would you post a song that you know isn't your best?
Why get one that you already have the ability to improve upon, critisized?
Put up a song that you feel represents your best effort, and then get ways to improve upon that. And you could also stop being a sexist ****. That may help.

I wasn't being sexist, your a confused little person.

I posted one of my mediocre songs so I could see how that turns out. I've posted my best stuff online before and its gotten stolen by other bands that I know. To me it looks like your too stupid to realize that people steal, and if I posted my best, the opportunity might come up for someone who actually likes it to steal it, your not very smart...

And if your so interested in being a little badass, why don't you ****ing come on AIM so we can have a real discussion you scaredy ass.

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Noobs are great, arent they!

If you dont even think that the song is good, then what makes you think that anyone else will?

Because there are some really lame songs out there that are pretty good. They might not even mean something, but they are someones feelings and/or they just rule.

It's not that bad i mean I like how you took the time to think of something like that.

All i'm saying is it's not the best i have seen but it is also pretty good and well thought out so I'm not saying its bad at all.

I think it's good

7/10

I agree, the lyrics are pretty lame oh! But you got guts though!

bungalow, dead eternity....lets keep this clean.

I agree with what anyone says because its not the best but its not the worst none the less