The upper east of the lower south (Kiss, quote, memories)

explosions-in-my-pants · 03-17-2006, 06:57 PM

Rained down
Dripped through the floors
Coldest memories, days of true
Silenced thoughts, brainless spills
Everything lay open for you to see
Every thought, everything dream
Someday it will be
The confidence it lay still inside of me
The loneliest dreams faded to mist
The smile left open with a simple kiss
Softer and sweeter
The taste of his sweat
The moment we touched I could never forget.

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alright so those are my thoughts of today, and i couldn't pass up the chance to turn it into a song.. and well thats all i got i'm still here trying to figure out if i want a chorus or not.. but it needs lots of work... so i'll get to thinking about what else i can change.. and or add.. in the mean time you guys i'm sure would just love to give me your opinions.

03-17-2006, 06:57 PM	#1 (permalink)
explosions-in-my-pants angel of tragic days Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 901	The upper east of the lower south Rained down Dripped through the floors Coldest memories, days of true Silenced thoughts, brainless spills Everything lay open for you to see Every thought, everything dream Someday it will be The confidence it lay still inside of me The loneliest dreams faded to mist The smile left open with a simple kiss Softer and sweeter The taste of his sweat The moment we touched I could never forget. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- alright so those are my thoughts of today, and i couldn't pass up the chance to turn it into a song.. and well thats all i got i'm still here trying to figure out if i want a chorus or not.. but it needs lots of work... so i'll get to thinking about what else i can change.. and or add.. in the mean time you guys i'm sure would just love to give me your opinions.