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Crazy Luv · 03-10-2006, 10:11 PM

that sounds good to me

you might want to start editing, instead of posting two times in a row

Merkaba · 03-11-2006, 04:30 PM

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Originally Posted by Jadix

Ya I'm really not getting my idea across clearly. I wanted this to have a much more constructive and good feeling. Let me try to explain my thinking on the last verse so you guys can help make it clearer.

Then one day I realized there's
Nothing I can change

I meant theres nothing about the past you can change. The point I want to make is that you have to move on, and MAKE a change happen instead of just waiting for it.

Oh okay, see I thought "Nothing I can change" was refering to the next bit in the piece. So "nothing I can change if all I do is hide then". Thats where my thinkning was. It changes perspective when you say it like that insteado f what i was thinking.

~~Rabid Sea Turtles~~ · 03-11-2006, 05:00 PM

I like it.
I give props to anyone who can write a song and then post it on mb for all to compliment or criticize.

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~~Rabid Sea Turtles~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: In the sea... Posts: 252	I like it. I give props to anyone who can write a song and then post it on mb for all to compliment or criticize.