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Now, this may be QUITE controversial to a certain scottish woman I happen to love very much, but oh well.

father is crying paragraoh credited to LOZ from scotland.
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Some people buy wine glasses just to put them next to greeting cards
To remind ‘em of a memory
That never really was.

Ohh this could get messy
Harsh words exchanged
In perfume’s words, “it isn’t necessary”

I’ve replaced my Scottish friend with my British friend that I don’t know so well in my top 8 at myspace dot com.

Father is crying
Because the barn is on fire
Can you help me buy a new chimney sweep?
I’m too poor to buy one.

Let’s crash in heaven and make the lesbians angry.
Then you can persuade me to go on to Freedom Of Speech.

I’ve replaced my Scottish friend with my British friend that I don’t know so well in my top 8 at myspace dot com. [But it’s not really about that, love, now is it?]

Copy cat!
Copy cat!
Copy cat!

Eff, u, see, kay
YOU!
Ya ****in’ copy cat.

I’ve replaced my Scottish friend with my British friend that I don’t know so well in my top 8 on myspace dot com.

(Then we hear someone whisper) … But it’s not really about that, love, is it?

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EDIT: title is now "**** north vietnam"

Its awful, I don't see how you can really improve it because the whole idea is stupid. "I’ve replaced my Scottish friend with my British friend that I don’t know so well in my top 8 on myspace dot com." that line just pisses me off, and the whole song comes off as a pathetic rant from some a preteen who spends way too much time on myspace. I don't like it at all, and thats my stance on it.

Did you see the, "buts thats not really it, love, now is it?"

Its much more than what you think it is.

you dont know what much more is... get over yourself

Oh sure.
I don't know what much more is, sure.

thank you. instead of saying something of substance, you just sent more crappy words outta your fingers... NOW i understand where you get your inspiration

**** you.

creepinson, see what you have started. Now she is going to go on a attention whoring rant about how she knows what more is because she has done this and this and that. Thanks man :)


I think the song sucked. If you were trying to go for humor you killed it.

Nono, I pmed him instead.
Arenchya proud?

Of course not because you made it a point to say that. And I still say that you should just drop this song. It sucks, there is no hope for it. At least I know what ever I write isn't good and I write it to get thoughts down or just to make myself giggle. But you still find it a need to post it in a forum so people will talk about it and you can say that it has a deeper meaning than it does.