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angel18 · 03-14-2006, 12:49 PM

ok not sure what u mean but thanx for the comment

Crashing Sun · 03-14-2006, 01:23 PM

i mean this feels a bit raw like you just started writing this out because you were angry. there's no reason why you can't go back and put some actual work into it. how does a thought that never changes remain a stupid lie? i just don't understand lines like that. you know what u mean but u have to make sure the reader knows too

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Crashing Sun Idontthinkyouknow Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Out of the Frying Pan Posts: 102	i mean this feels a bit raw like you just started writing this out because you were angry. there's no reason why you can't go back and put some actual work into it. how does a thought that never changes remain a stupid lie? i just don't understand lines like that. you know what u mean but u have to make sure the reader knows too __________________ People Against People "Scientists in Taiwan say they have bred three pigs that glow in the dark." (Support Spam)

03-14-2006, 12:49 PM	#1 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	ok not sure what u mean but thanx for the comment