Confession (quote, band, songs, Lute)

angel18 · 02-15-2006, 04:46 PM

Confession
My friend called today
He said 'way too long'
Since I talked to you
What did I do wrong?

Truth is I'm afraid
Of all that he might say
And all the wrong I've done
Taking every day.

Let me down
Didn't care
I'm hung out to dry
My confession.
(And now you're here
I abandon fear
All I need is someone to hear
My confession)

I confess to the rest
My short failings
And long winded mauling of truth
And attempts to deceive you
How can I plead
And make you believe
That the penance received
Could cancel the deed
And cast all my sins away, Need some forgiveness

TrampInaTux · 02-16-2006, 03:39 AM

Absolute rubbish
Woefully Crap
Fukking Disgraceful
U are sh*t
Let this be a lesson be learnt-GIVE UP.

Mama Booze · 02-16-2006, 05:17 PM

When you were new you writ no better, and I was never mean to you about it, hobo, so pay it forward man

Quote:

And now you're here
I abandon fear
All I need is someone to hear

Best three lines in the whole song...
The song has potential...try to make some metaphors though, ok?
And what's with the "my friend.." songs?

TrampInaTux · 02-17-2006, 05:00 AM

True, very true, but now that I'm not new I have the right.

Mama Booze · 02-17-2006, 06:31 AM

lesigh I suppose.

02-15-2006, 04:46 PM	#1 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	Confession Confession My friend called today He said 'way too long' Since I talked to you What did I do wrong? Truth is I'm afraid Of all that he might say And all the wrong I've done Taking every day. Let me down Didn't care I'm hung out to dry My confession. (And now you're here I abandon fear All I need is someone to hear My confession) I confess to the rest My short failings And long winded mauling of truth And attempts to deceive you How can I plead And make you believe That the penance received Could cancel the deed And cast all my sins away, Need some forgiveness

02-16-2006, 03:39 AM	#2 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Absolute rubbish Woefully Crap Fukking Disgraceful U are sh*t Let this be a lesson be learnt-GIVE UP.

02-17-2006, 05:00 AM	#4 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	True, very true, but now that I'm not new I have the right.

02-17-2006, 06:31 AM	#5 (permalink)
Mama Booze Here's lookin at you, kid Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: The White Hotel Posts: 366	lesigh I suppose.