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02-12-2006, 03:01 PM | #1 (permalink) |
They call me Tundra Boy
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Hmmm, what could this one be about?
Break the Silence:
Carve out A pattern In my back With nailmarks (x2) Trembled tension Pulses pounding Forget about Our surroundings (x2) No words, no prose Both my hands in your clothes Feeling how fast your heart is beating Prone pleasure on your back Imitate a heart attack Waking up the street with gale-force breathing Break the silence Break the silence Trembled tension Pulses pounding Forget about Our surroundings (x2) Warm bed, thin walls Noises that you can’t control Everyone can hear you instinct screaming Prone pleasure on your back Imitate a heart attack Waking up the street with gale-force breathing Break the silence Break the silence |
02-12-2006, 03:10 PM | #2 (permalink) |
Freeskier
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about sex, obviously. It's good, well written, and flows well, but I'm not crazy about it. Songs about sex are great, but personally, without any mention of any emotions tied to it, the song just doesn't interest me. It could be that the song is about sex being the only important thing between two people, but in that situation, there are circumstances that have resulted in that type of relationship. Good writing, but the subject, as it is, just doesn't interest me that much, who knows, maybe it's because i'm a girl.
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02-12-2006, 04:03 PM | #3 (permalink) |
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I on the other hand rather enjoyed that. The way it flow's the way you can picture how its happening so clear, the nails on the back everything.. seems intense. It works well with my mind well reading it for a few reasons.. i have a very intense imaginenation and can picture things so perfectly, more so sexual things, so because of this i think the song/poem is great just fits perfectly but where its sex related it wouldn't say its "sex", "making love" or anything of any romantic nature.. more so... yea you know what i'm saying
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02-12-2006, 04:56 PM | #4 (permalink) | |
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What you've done becomes the judge of what you're going to do -- especially in other people's minds. When you're traveling, you are what you are right there and then. People don't have your past to hold against you. No yesterdays on the road. William Least Heat Moon, Blue Highways Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass. HOOKED ON THE WHITE POWDER |
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02-12-2006, 05:00 PM | #5 (permalink) | |
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02-12-2006, 05:05 PM | #7 (permalink) | |
Freeskier
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What you've done becomes the judge of what you're going to do -- especially in other people's minds. When you're traveling, you are what you are right there and then. People don't have your past to hold against you. No yesterdays on the road. William Least Heat Moon, Blue Highways Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass. HOOKED ON THE WHITE POWDER |
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02-12-2006, 05:07 PM | #8 (permalink) | |
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02-12-2006, 08:01 PM | #10 (permalink) | |
Freeskier
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What you've done becomes the judge of what you're going to do -- especially in other people's minds. When you're traveling, you are what you are right there and then. People don't have your past to hold against you. No yesterdays on the road. William Least Heat Moon, Blue Highways Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass. HOOKED ON THE WHITE POWDER |
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