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Mama Booze 01-28-2006 08:59 PM

Mornings With Jilly And Jack
 
Mornings With Jilly and Jack

I wanna take back mornings with Jack
I wanna live in last year.
Cheers to the past.
And mornings with Jilly and Jack.

It was something inside her that died long ago
And if it happens again
It'll surely be gone for good.
So...

She'll risk it
He'll fail her
And he won't even mail her.
('n' it'll surely be gone for good.)

I wanna live in last year
Cheers to the past...
And mornings with Jilly and Jack.

Silly Jilly
and old Jacky Mac
To hell with their
"We'll always have Paris"
pact.

I wanna take back mornings with Jack
I wanna live in last year.
Cheers to the past.
And mornings with Jilly and Jack.

Sing her a song,
and she'll stay a while.
Don't let her down, this time, Jack.
Make her a pact.

I wanna live in last year!
Cheers to the past!
And mornings with Jilly and Jack!
(And mornings with Jilly and Jack...)
And mornings with Jilly and Jack.
(And mornings with Jilly and Jack)

x3

explosions-in-my-pants 01-28-2006 09:43 PM

aww sweetie, i really liked that song.. it was really good.. now we need to gear up a band.. woo

:band:

Mama Booze 01-28-2006 09:44 PM

Aw thank you muchly, and definatly. hehe

No critiscm? :]

explosions-in-my-pants 01-28-2006 09:51 PM

silly jilly annoy's me.. but thats about it..

Mama Booze 01-28-2006 09:52 PM

Hm...what else rhymes with Jilly that could be used as a name?

explosions-in-my-pants 01-28-2006 09:54 PM

thats just it my dear... stop trying so hard to rhyme things.. after a while sometimes it can get annoying.. not everything has to fit like perfect. actaclly most of the best songs i've heard don't have that rhyming stuff..

Mama Booze 01-28-2006 09:56 PM

but with the beat I have in my head the rhyme goes better...

explosions-in-my-pants 01-28-2006 09:58 PM

i dunno well i get it.. but words liek billy willy.. i dunno they go with it.. but yea i think i hate most rhymes anyways.. it took me till this year to acually sit down and write a rhyming poem.. and i hate them..

Mama Booze 01-28-2006 09:59 PM

Aye then, thanks Sab :]

Crazy Luv 01-31-2006 08:51 PM

to me it just kept saying the same thing over and over again and also, it seems like one of the songs that the music is more focused on than the words.

Mama Booze 02-01-2006 01:13 PM

Thanks Crazy.
It's more of a personal song, really, just thought I's post it up :]


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