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01-21-2006, 02:15 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Music Addict
Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 129
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Help Me Please
I can’t help but wonder why I was brought here
I was among people I didn’t know, or like Why I can’t help but be on my own, It’s not like I’m afraid, it’s just I don’t know anyone, I’d rather be back home, where I belong. But I’m here the place I truly hate The place where it happened all that time ago A place I will never go to again I don’t want to have to come back here. Help me, oh help me please I want to find myself and who I am Help me, oh help me please I want to find myself and who I am. I feel so hopeless about the future And what it will bring, depending on where it ends I sit in a house where I know people love me But they don’t seem to realise how I’m feeling I wonder if I’ll ever move on in my mind I feel stuck in a moment I can’t get out of How much I’d like to go and see things I will never see If I stay among the things that frighten me so much. Help me, oh help me please I want to find myself and who I am Help me, oh help me please I want to find myself and who I am. |
01-22-2006, 06:14 AM | #2 (permalink) | |
a l'amou fou pou tout
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: NY
Posts: 355
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^seriously, you got ****ing problems.
but anyways... Quote:
ummm...i tried. but it needs to be more improved then that. just trying to show you ideas of some sort. the "i want to find myself and who i am" part...well finding yourself is the same thing as finding who you are. So i was trying to think of something else to put in its place. IDK, what do you think? |
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01-23-2006, 07:11 AM | #5 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 5
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I wish everyone could be happy.That goes back to Adam and Eve.However,all of us that are unhappy do live though our music also.Angell 18,I think it will be a great song when your done.There are many that have felt the words of your song.To get through hurt and pain in are live we need to speak of it.
All great song start with true feeling.YOU GO GIRL !!!! |