A poem
 

Across the nightmare

in the darkness
you find the light
i only know
my fear and blight

across the nigtmare
my love refined
truth and light
they intertwine

my once sore thoughts
my vindictive scars
i die once again
Among all the stars

my thoughts betrayed
the petals lie bare
their broken in dream
and wore from ware

the truth be known
in love and life
it all becomes
alittle trife

holy crap no definitions

although the rhythmic flow is acceptable (only barely, thanks to terribly forced rhymes) the flow between ideas is terrible

nothing ties in with the last, and it just seems like a jumble of words... i would be amazed if you could tell me what its about, because it seems like you just did your best to piece some pretty words together... really cosmetic really shallow... have a nice ****in day

It sounds pretty. but some of the words....yea...
& can you tell us the point, i wanna see if i got it right or not.