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Freeskier
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Istanbul was Constantinople now it's Istanbul not Constantinople...
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can't decide if it flows enough between the verses, the ideas connect in my head, but I just want to know if it works for other people too. and as always, point out anything that comes to mind that could be improved on.
lost in transition, so is this a temporary settling for second-best or a step on to another path. Does this interlude announce A new picture or simply A cheap reflection of What used to be. This no-mans-land has Its own advantages, Non-committal and lucid, Perfect for a mind Saturated with too many Variables and intricacies But trapped between two Definite and opposite realities Presents still more ways To be tripped and tangled, Paralyzed with indecision. So now I find these muscles, Soft and limp from atrophy can’t Take a stance on one path or another. What harm can more waiting do anyway.
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What you've done becomes the judge of what you're going to do -- especially in other people's minds. When you're traveling, you are what you are right there and then. People don't have your past to hold against you. No yesterdays on the road. William Least Heat Moon, Blue Highways Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass. HOOKED ON THE WHITE POWDER |
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