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01-16-2006, 03:15 AM
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a l'amou fou pou tout
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: NY
Posts: 364
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no no, im taking all the reviews i can get. good ideas, im working on it.
how about this... i have a secret place Somewhere i can go to just get away from everything in tow it helps me calm down when im having a fit or stops the tears from flowing when things arent...blah this is my lil sisters poem & shes asking for help, but i dont know what to tell her, any ideas? orrrr this one... Im walking home from work Alone in these cold streets Suddenly the streetlights turn off And i hear footsteps lingering behind me I turn around but no ones in sight Must of been my imagination continue on my way An uncomfortable feeling comes upon me Unknown arms grab hold of me in a firm grip They pull me into the shadows never to be seen again or maybe... Must of been my imagination continue on my way An uncomfortable feeling comes upon me An unknown creature jumps out of the shadows After a fit of panic, i figure out its just my puppy one more... Remember when you said you'll always be in reach... how am i to reach you now? Remember when you said the limit for us is imperishable as of now, that thought is convicted I would be more understanding if it were an accident but you knew the risks and took that chance Did the thought of our future even cross your mind when you went with your buddies to do your thing When we were together you always had something smart to say so what are you referring now? Cant quite perceive what you're trying to tell me you see...i cant hear through your casket  im just going to stop trying for tonight
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