She! (member, songs)

angel18 · 01-15-2006, 06:57 AM

Okay didn't get much feedback from the first here's the second!

She

She was a beautiful person to me
She was kind and caring
She always smiled when I’d see her
She would talk about all the things I loved

Little did she know I loved everything about her?
Little did she know I always talked about her?
Little by little I grew to love her more and more

If only I could see her now
If only I could remember her smile
If only I didn’t leave home
If only I had stayed and been with her

I wish I could turn back time
I want to come back home
I want her to be alive today

Why did she have to die?
Why was it so painful?
Why didn’t someone help her?
Why didn’t she live to see me today?

My life is not worth living
My life is not worth crying for
My life is so complicated
My life is incomplete without her

My life is not worth living
My life is not worth crying for
My life is so complicated
My life is incomplete without her

either/or · 01-15-2006, 07:01 AM

yeah that end is so very very painfully, tear to my eye cliche and whiny and oh my snap snap snap poof im gone bye bye

TrampInaTux · 01-15-2006, 07:02 AM

This is purely and simply one of the worst songs I have saw this forum. Maybe sometimes it's a good thing to get no feedback. It's another whiney, moaning song with no real point other than top exist and annoy. And why is there a question mark after nearly every line in the second verse? IT ISN'T A QUESTION! Or should I say, IT ISN'T A QUESTION?

01-15-2006, 06:57 AM	#1 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	She! Okay didn't get much feedback from the first here's the second! She She was a beautiful person to me She was kind and caring She always smiled when I’d see her She would talk about all the things I loved Little did she know I loved everything about her? Little did she know I always talked about her? Little by little I grew to love her more and more If only I could see her now If only I could remember her smile If only I didn’t leave home If only I had stayed and been with her I wish I could turn back time I want to come back home I want her to be alive today Why did she have to die? Why was it so painful? Why didn’t someone help her? Why didn’t she live to see me today? My life is not worth living My life is not worth crying for My life is so complicated My life is incomplete without her My life is not worth living My life is not worth crying for My life is so complicated My life is incomplete without her

01-15-2006, 07:01 AM	#2 (permalink)
either/or Don't think twice Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: A basement on the hill Posts: 352	yeah that end is so very very painfully, tear to my eye cliche and whiny and oh my snap snap snap poof im gone bye bye __________________ Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation

01-15-2006, 07:02 AM	#3 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	This is purely and simply one of the worst songs I have saw this forum. Maybe sometimes it's a good thing to get no feedback. It's another whiney, moaning song with no real point other than top exist and annoy. And why is there a question mark after nearly every line in the second verse? IT ISN'T A QUESTION! Or should I say, IT ISN'T A QUESTION?